This was getting good but the i came to the end of chapter 4.\

love the story update soon

This is actually a fairly decent story. You're grammar and writing style are very experienced, which I was surprised to find. However, Colette has a few Mary Sue traits. Her unusual eye color, her mysterious past(which are both very cliche), and the way Ed seems to immediately take a liking to her, especially the subtle romance in only the third chapter.

I also must disagree on the whole EdxWinry thing. The pairing is actually canon. The two even admit(although not to each other) that they love one another in the manga. Anyway, that's all for now. Ciao!

♥ Kiseki

yea...dat was kinda corny...

Hey, I love your story! It's so good! Just so you know, Ed and Al's mom died around 1910 (i think, if im not mistaken...) Anywayz, I hope you keep writting the story, 'cause I loved it!!

hehehe...this chapter did kinda suck compared to the other three. but i think this story is good. FINISH...!
hehe i find it quite interesting. COME ON! COME ON! COME ON! COME ON!...o.o

This is an VERY interesting story! ME WANTS MORE! Update soon.

this is REALLY COOL!! *squeals like a fangirl*
*ahem* aniiwaiiz please update soon!! ^^ :3

this is really good i havent read many edxoc stories so i cant compare it to anything but i really like it so please update soon it would make me happy ^^

Nice EdxOC fic. Keep up[dating!!

I love this. I really do!It's awesome!

So far I LOVE IT! E-mail buddies? just don't e-mail me yet. something is wrong with my msn inbox.srry.

Hey! This is a very good story. I think you should continue on! You have a great start so why leave at that? Hope to read more, and keep up the great work!

JinxJinki

I love ur story! my fav part was the last line!! lmao! Oh, well! Anyway I hope you update soon!

i agree with you 100% about winry. i'm not to much of a fan of her. not because she gets ed, but because she's an annoying little twit. make more!

Hiya! I like it! I got it off of Sariyu-chan's page. Hehe... I agree about the EdxWinry thing. They like each other, but he doesn't like her as more than a sister and a friend... even though it's there, I still can't stand it. Like your story. Keep posting.