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Claire92
2009-11-27 . chapter 1
UPDATE! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
please, if ur still in college. yes, i sympathize, college is a BIATCH. but i am really hoping you find time to finish amazing story! it just can't go unifinished!
like a falling star
2009-10-04 . chapter 19
Hi, I found your story on The Fire & Ice Archive and when it stopped at chapter 12 I nearly had a heart attack. So I tracked it to and now it's stopped at chapter 19!

I see you haven't updated this story in two years but please please PLEASE continue! I know this is gonna sound rather hypocritical from someone who hasn't updated in something like three years, but it would be a waste not to complete one of the best d/g stories I've come across. You have an amazing talent!
nina10966
2009-10-04 . chapter 19
omg that is boss ! cant wait until the nex chap ! hope u update soon
nina10966
2009-10-04 . chapter 19
omg that is boss ! cant wait until the nex chap ! hope u update soon
nina10966
2009-10-04 . chapter 19
omg that is boss ! cant wait until the nex chap ! hope u update soon
nina10966
2009-10-04 . chapter 19
omg that is boss ! cant wait until the nex chap ! hope u update soon
Beauty Amongst The Chaos
2009-09-27 . chapter 19
So I got to this story on by my favorite process: reading one story, going to that author's favorites, reading one of theirs, etc. And it stops at chapter 12 there, and I sent you a message (blackraven) saying update. Then I came here and saw that you had MORE chapters, which was great. I truly enjoy this story and the characters' development. So, I need you to finish it. Please! It's really not fair to leave it here.
Murph
2009-09-16 . chapter 19
Oi! Hurry up with the update, will you?
BloodAndDiamonds
2009-08-02 . chapter 19
Whoa...
This is a truly amazing story, and I'm quite devastated to learn that you haven't updated in two years...
You should continue this, it's already one of the best HP stories I've read on the site, and thats alot of fanfics.
You portray both the characters exactly as they should be, and make them so believable for 1st person writing.
I love this story, so update? ~ BloodAndDiamonds
Murph
2009-07-29 . chapter 19
Amazing, as per usual.

Unfortunately, SOMEONE hasn't UPDATED in two years.
Bleeding procrastinator. Chapter 19 had better come soon, yeah?
Murph
2009-07-28 . chapter 15
Oh, how well do I know that feeling.
Murph
2009-07-28 . chapter 14
Ah...

No matter how many times I read this story, it's always brilliant.
sunshineemomix
2009-07-18 . chapter 19
This is brillant and I love Ginny's character - she is so beleivable and real for a person. And writing in first persin is a tricky buisness.
Murphy Annen Thiamine
2009-07-16 . chapter 19
Update. Now. Please.

I ... eh, don't ... I am speechless. This is unnatural. Fix it.

So.
Update. Now. Please.
severed quills
2009-07-06 . chapter 19
AH you're such an amzing writer !
i love your story and how it draws you in, the way you write draco, the way ginny's so adorably lovesick and just GAH.
it's amazing.
it's so incredibly frustrating though, that i can read stories with upwards of 10 reviews and i actually stop reading them before their finished because they are complete and utter CRAP yet your story is one i havent been able to stop myself from devouring every word, and its got less reviews than it deserves.
it makes me annoyed that its so unappreciated.
i see that its been 2 years since you've updated, and while i understand that everyday life and such demands your attention above satiating us avid readers, but i hope that at some point you finish your story.
i love reading your writing !
you are made of awesomesauce.'
seriously :P
best wishes.
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