I've read this story several times already and it never gets old! I absolutely love it! I wish you'd write a sequel.

This was excellantly written. The flow was smooth and the progression of events was believable, especially when you wrote Hermione.

The dialogue between her and Vicktor and the detail with the dictionary & Hermione finding his conversation with her written over and over again was a good detail to add in because it showed us as readers that Vicktor truely cared.

I think you did a great job showing each of their nervouness through how they looked and such.

Kudos,

Jazzelyn Emory Roisin

I have to tell you this story is AMAZINGLY well done, and very realistic and in line with Hermione and Victor's Characters. I loved it very much :)

whew! (fans self) that was nice and steamy!! sounds like a pretty perfect first time...its nice to see someone write about that in a realistic way rather than just say, oh quick little pinch and that's it...any chance for a part 2?

This story is the best (y)

Oh. That was truly beautiful! The best I've read!

I loved it! But i didn't get your title...

Oh. This was so sweet Thanks. I love Krum stories.

This was amazing. Please, please keep writing in this fandom! I love your writing style and your sense of the characters! Wonderful!

This is an accurate portrayl of a first time. Reminded me of mine...*reminisces*

OMG>>
such an amazing story...
i completely fell in love!!

This was...really wonderful. No offense, but I was surprised. There are a lot of first time/GoF Hermione and Krum fics that are so...blargh.

I was pleasantly surprised to be drawn into this the more I read it. Your grasp of descriptions and the whole characterizations of both of them are really wonderful. And I loved Hermione interacting with the other members of Durmstrang...it gave it a much more TRUE feeling to it rather than, "she went to the ship and found no resistance, blah, blah, blah," and all that.


This was very, very, very good. *adds to favorites*

Aww...that was so sweet. I think you should write a sequel. I mean with an ending like that, a sequel is DEFINITELY expected...

;-; This was so wonderful. Not only did it give a beautiful light onto a Krum/Hermione relationship--something I've come to realize as difficult and/or rare--but you're not one of those pathetic writers who make sex into some divine, perfect thing.

This was such an accurate portrayal of the age-range and personalities of both characters, in every situation. From her going into his room, to him looking over himself in the mirror (wonderful teenager moment there--that humanized him more then HPGF did originally), to him being so attentive, to her own rationalizing.

This story is bitter sweet, however, because though it was so beautifully written, and ended so sweetly--it's only a one-shot in your verse, or if it was made into a story untold in HPGF, then she never really sees him again--and then she's with Ron. I had hoped so much about his reappearance in DH, but it just sucked.

Thank you for writing this.

It was very nice and detailed, but I am wondering whether he was talking in Balgarski or Ruski, it sounds like the former. And I think its Supruga.


-Ira or N