   TiskTask 11/12/06 . chapter 6I'm sorry I can't even finish this chapter...I don't want to sound mean but I hate it when people break...It just seems wrong. |
| lyn 10/25/04 . chapter 6 write more |
| XxDancingActressOnlinexX 9/10/04 . chapter 6 MORE MORE MORE!Or I shall uleash the power of a Snape Moment over you! |
| Cariah Delonne 2/28/04 . chapter 6 Xelena,
OOh! Does he have an ulterior motive in this? When I first started, I thought it was a bit fast, and a bit fluffy - but there's a twist starting to form! I like! Write more! (And thanks for reviewing me D )
Cariah. |
| Amber Evans Potter 3/8/03 . chapter 6 O.o Something's odd. I need to know what happens next! Please update soon! *goes down on her hands and knees* PLEASE! |
| Amber Evans Potter 3/8/03 . chapter 5 n_n We ALL wanted ff.net back up! And it IS! *does a happy dance* I love this! Its getting better and better! If you ever have some off time, I suggest you tweak the first two chapters and then your fic will be absolutely perfect! n_n I'm loving it! |
| Amber Evans Potter 3/8/03 . chapter 4 Wow! This is great so far! *sigh* why must Sarah always be so difficult? I would go with him in a heartbeat! Forget all that feminist bullshit. *goes starry eyed* must see what happens next. |
| Amber Evans Potter 3/8/03 . chapter 3 Yay! And the chapters are getting much better too! Less spelling mistakes, more dialouge, BETTER dialouge, and longer too! n_n wow, you're good! I'm off to see what happens next. |
| Amber Evans Potter 3/8/03 . chapter 2 Yay! I LOVE the last sentance! n_n I have to go see what the next chapter is! Just watch those spelling mistakes and some punctuation errors. Those wouldn't be too noticable if the chapters were a bit longer. n_n Great so far though! |
| Amber Evans Potter 3/8/03 . chapter 1 This is a good beginning. It's kinda slow, some spelling mistakes, and the dialouge could use some work. No, this is NOT a flame! Just some advice to check on the things I mentioned. I'm interested so don't worry. n_n and thank you for reviewing my two Labyrinth fics by the way! |
| Little Miss Molly 2/4/03 . chapter 6 O_O THERE'S AN IMPOSTER!*Points at the other Mickey*00;
FWEE! - Mesa luff storeh! MOOOOOOOORE! MOOOOO! |
| Lillyrose 5/14/02 . chapter 6 MOOOORE! please! I JUST LOVE THIS STORY.. KEEP IT UP..AND GIVE MORE SOON! |
| doesn't live here anymore 3/2/02 . chapter 6 Oh please don't let it hanging there, just when you think Jareth might be nice... |
| Mickey 12/15/01 . chapter 6 argh! i wanna know what on earth is jareth planning! i need the next chapter! |
| Mickey 12/15/01 . chapter 3 haha.. sarah getting along with karen? now that's interesting _! and what could the GK possibly want from sarah? ooooh this is getting exciting! |
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