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| satine 2006-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abusei think you have done a wonderful impression of her charactor. i am a big fan of audrey hepburn she is my favorate actor and you have captured the essence of her charactor very well. bravo. |
| TinkerKid 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI think this is a great little story. The writing was smart and I could imagine Holly and Paul--er, Fred--interacting with the characteristic dialogue. Good job :) |
| Kasei Tomodatchi 2005-11-29 ch 1, | abuseHey, very well written! The narrative was wonderful and Holly's dialogue is perfect--that's exactly the way she talks and reacts to the world. I think that you did a fabulous job with this. I was never much a fan of the movie, and I've never read the book, but from what I have seen and understand this mirrors the overall feel of Breakfast at Tiffany's quite nicely. I think that it would fit right alongside any of the official works. :) |