Very good! I loved how rambly and in character Holly was. This was very well written and a great little oneshot. LOVED it!

~Red

i think you have done a wonderful impression of her charactor. i am a big fan of audrey hepburn she is my favorate actor and you have captured the essence of her charactor very well. bravo.

I think this is a great little story. The writing was smart and I could imagine Holly and Paul--er, Fred--interacting with the characteristic dialogue. Good job :)

Hey, very well written! The narrative was wonderful and Holly's dialogue is perfect--that's exactly the way she talks and reacts to the world. I think that you did a fabulous job with this. I was never much a fan of the movie, and I've never read the book, but from what I have seen and understand this mirrors the overall feel of Breakfast at Tiffany's quite nicely. I think that it would fit right alongside any of the official works. :)