that was extremely cheesy...i loved it! yay cheesy fluff! jack lived! awesome story!

Aw. That was such an amazing little snippet.
You should defo continue x
Well done x

aww that was really sweet

Great one-shot! I'm so glad Jack didn't die!

That was so sweet!I acually started to cry a little!
I LOVE IT!Imagine losing someone you love more than life!!I mean,WOW.I probably would let go!

wow... you made me cry... titanic always makes me cry!!

yes yes yes! i want u to write more. it was really well done. not like any of the fics where jack lives but it is really cheesy or stupid.

please write more soon!

Ok, I'm CRYING! That was BEAUTIFUL!

~Tina101

Please continue!! You did really good!

CONTINUE PLEASE

Cheesy? Not at all! I like Jack lives stories. I know he died in the movie and some people get upset when stories change that, but this is fanfic, so you can write anything you want and it's perfectly valid. Thanks for an enjoyable read.

aw...sweet!

I too, AnnaTheFreakMonkey, have been reading depressing Titanic fanfics and crying while listening to My Heart Will Go On and eating chocolate! It's the sort of thing I'd do.

Anyway, this was REALLY GOOD. Not like those stupid cheesy Titanic fanfics. Please continue.

aw that was so sweet!

*sobs* Wow that was really good... I have been listening to My Heart Will go on, reading depressing Titanic fics and crying... and eating chocolate... *rolls eyes* I'm such a girl... I think you should keep going on with this story... I like it a lot. I'll also check out your Harry Potter one. I'm a regular on the harry potter section. :D I've probably read it already... meh i can't keep track i've read so many :D