I was wandering around the Luke and Mara stories and found this one. I really enjoy your writing. I was very sad to see that it hasn't been updated in over a year. Have you given up on it? That would be too bad, since it is very good. Hope you find a time to update.

OMG review! This story is so good! It's been a favorite of my since before I became Myriad Daydreams, when I was just an innocent reader... your story is awesome and I want to know how it ends! Yay Faelai!

-Myriad Daydreams

I can't wait for you to update this. So can you update is soon?

When are you going to update?

Really good. Please update soon.

Please update soon!

cool! More...

Wicked good. Please update.

Please OH PLEASE update soon.

It was nice to see what happened to Mara just before she found Luke. Like Luke, she had a vision but in her vision she saw Obi-Wan who had found the temple just after delivering the baby Luke to his aunt and uncle. I found it interesting when both past and future mingled with each other. Both Luke and Mara learned a lot from their respective visions and it was good to see the two of them together again. Luke will have his work cut out for him while he rebuilds the Jedi Order and he wouldn't be doing it alone. Now that Leia and Han have finally arrived on Naboo, I wonder what they will find. Things will be interesting especially the way they were greeted when they landed. Is the queen some relation to Padme, especially since the share the same name? I can't wait to learn more.

At least now Mara is in the same place that Luke is in. She just has to find out where he is. I really liked how Mara used the Force to lead herself to Luke and what she went through to get to him. The appearance of Luke's father to him was great. Anakin was able to shed some light onto what Luke at discovered in the book. It was good to hear about the prophecy about Anakin being the Chosen One. Plus it was good for Luke to hear a little about his mother. The end of Luke and Anakin's conversation was funny especially when Anakin told Luke to wake up.

Wonderful story! I hope the next chapter's coming soon.

Wow. That was really good. I can not wait for more.

this is weird, but cool, i can't wait to read the next chapter. ow and, happy newyear ^^

wow, cool :D (somehow, the moment you said that thing about a glass temple in the sand, i knew you were talking about a jedi temple. don't ask me why, i just knew.)