Ah! Update! Like now! I'm addicted!

i luv this story please continue♥

this is a greatt first chapter =)
ure an amazing writer, id love for you to review my story and give me some feedback!

im new to writing fanfiction, so yeahh haha
thanks soo much!

i lovee ure story.
im gonna keep reading!

p.s.: uve got a really awesome writing stylee! i hope u review my story because i really could use some feedback.

u sorta do sound like a comic book narrator but not a bad one. I have nevr watched the OC but i know theres a girl with black hair that looks like Adam Brody. is that her??

Well i cant wait 2 read the next chapter!!

LOL go Mione!!
Trust me when she said, 'i cant see how anyone can let go of a relationship as great as that!' trust me my tongue wiuld literally b in knots LOL! like holy crap i agree with u i luv how Hrems can talk at 10 Miles Per Hour and not break a sweat. Well on2 read more of ur awesome story!!

Really great story, keep it up. I'm loving it, I love how the twins finish each other's sentences!!

This is a cute and funny story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.

cool!

lol, omg, althoug i am a total h/g, r/Hr,l/j shipper, i find your fic very enjoyable. okay, maria hat off, akhi hat on. this is flippin good! i wish my stories were as good as yours! and i love ron the yoda wannabe, or reallybe.

i'm reviering...so you're supposed to update! hello! common decency! lol
its awesome!

haha...yea...its hilarious when hermione goes crazy...im into this story so keep on writing for me :d

LMAO! That was halarious! Aww, poor Hermione.

It was great -- hope ya update soon!

Yea lol I like it when Harmione goes mad to lol, anyway I cant wait for the next update cause justlike Harmione i dont get why he broke up with Ginny, what his reason? great first chapter cant wait for the update=)