That was really good! ^_^ I love how its in first person from rens pov. Keep it up, hope to see more authors like you out there! =)

OMG ;_; BEAUTIFUL!
And please don't worry! Ren is not ooc! At all!
I've always thought that if Ren and Horo had a relationship, Ren would totally be like that, completely possessive over Horo

This story rocks! Great job! Love it!

Beautiful. Slightly ooc cos I think maybe Len is too cold for this, but you never know!

this is way cool, ure good at writing lemons( not being rude by the way)

OMG! This was SSO great! I wish I could write like that Goddamn it! This is SO going on my faves! Great job, I mean, who doesn't like a possesive Ren? I coulod really picture it in my fricken mind when I was reading it! Hope to see more work like this, it's great (I feel like a broken record now...).

~PLS~

Niceness man!! I envy your writing skills XD Anyways uh yeah...Seriously, I wanna rant about how much I loved it...but...seriously, school starts in like...checks watch...FIVE minutes! So yeah!! BYES!

- xImperfectlyX

That was so brilliantly perfect I don't even have words to describe it . . . just like . . . wow . . . *is in total awe* that was just so . . . perfect!
Ren was in perfect character, just the whole thing was like . . . just friggin' 'wow!' okay? I'm too dumbfounded by the brilliantness of it all to think of anything better to say . . .
Wow XD
~Nirah

Wow, Its amazing...
I like it! Make one for Horo!

NICE! one of my favorites but i'm too lazy to login right now so i'll add it later. still, LOVIN' IT! ^_^ you rock!

aws, that was so CUTE! wow, you havent updated in a long time...anyways, it was really cute though! love it!

HI! Great ficcy... I'd really like to leave a long review, but I gotta go to school (curse its evilness!)
yeah, wuved it bye