This could be interesting... if you have any intention of actually continuing the story.

Great Story!! I hope you don't let this one die. Cant wait to read more!

Keep It Up

hey just looking at other people's stories who have looked at mine. I have to say i like how you use the descriptive type of writting. It gives everything a sense of realism which makes it so much easier to picture. Good work keep it up :o)

update this story you slacker

continue

sounds like an entriguing story thus-far. I look forward to seeing how this progresses. My money's one Ami / Hotaru. There's few of them now-a-days.

nice start, would love to see more.
by the way, if there is a vote on pairing, mine is for hotaru.
till next...

Ok very interesting^^

This is a great stroy, you should most definatly continue this. Its really well written and stuff. If someone is reading a review to check if the story is a good read... READ IT! NOW.

This is interesting so far. It is a bit short but pretty good. Hope to see more of this in the future!

well I like it!

I like it. Please update soon.

Not a bad intro, well done.

great start to this fic

please continue

hope to see more chapters