 Tower of Babel 2009-01-28 . chapter 30Thank you, Legendary Chimera, you've been one of my biggest and loyal fans. You know, the ending to this story eluded me until 3 days ago when I just started writing...and thus, chapter 30 was born! I had a vague impression of how to end this story, but I could never get it right. Some things that happened in earlier chapters are still not right, but they'll have to do. I could've continued on with this story, however, I think this was enough, and as explained in the story, I feel that it couldn't have ended any other way.
But, I do have an idea for a sequel, so perhaps, you won't be missing this story for long. The gate is still open, remember, and Al & Ed's duplicates are in the Other World...so, who knows. |
 Legendary Chimera 2009-01-28 . chapter 30Bravo! Lovely finish! I really appreciate that you summoned up what had happened thus far after a long absences. Not only that, but you gave reasons for it, such as having to explain things to certain characters. If that makes sense. I have to laugh at your title in the beginning though. Instead of "To Save Ed!-chapter 30 you wrote "To Save End-chapter 30". But either way it kinda fits. Anyhow, great plot and characterization. I'll miss this story. Encore! |
 Legendary Chimera 2008-09-07 . chapter 29Oh boy did that ending crack me up! I can see Al getting all cocky and taking after his brother. Loved the stone replica soldiers of the brothers. It's funny you updated this cuz the other day I was sifting through my favorites and realized I missed this story. |
 Dark Reborn 2008-09-07 . chapter 29/gaping like a fish/ O.o That's a whole lot of stone warriors. But Al smirking smartly? I just love that. Imagining him doing that gives me giggles! Lol. Though, isn't Kaoru sorta in debt to Al, since Al did make him human again...
What's going to happen to Noah?
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 blue-soljah 2008-09-07 . chapter 29YAY you're alive! |
 XxHouranxX 2008-01-29 . chapter 28Well, that was certainly a turn of events! O_o
Please update soon!! ^o^ |
 Dark Reborn 2008-01-21 . chapter 28Wow, please update! ^_^ |
 Cheza the Flower Maiden 2007-05-23 . chapter 1This is getting good. |
 Bar-Ohki 2007-05-11 . chapter 28Gah! You and your evil cliffies! I like them though. I hope you update soon! |
 FaLlEn-AnGeL627 2007-05-02 . chapter 28omg cliffhanger update soon lov it |
 Legendary Chimera 2007-05-02 . chapter 28Eep! Doesn't it just suck when plans backfire on you? Though every time I pictured this hand moving on it's own I nearly died laughing. Good chapter, worth the wait. |
 blue-soljah 2007-05-02 . chapter 28YAY! A NEW CHAPTER! how long has it been? lol But amazing chapter! I was surprise to see that Al was in Den's body! Very creative! |
 hanjuuluver 2007-01-04 . chapter 27realy great story!! I love how you described everything so well! I could almost picture everything that was going on! I'm so sorry I didn't get to review earlier, but I was on vacation in Florida, and so I couldn't. again, great job! |
 Tower of Babel 2006-12-28 . chapter 27The story is almost over, just a couple of chapters left! A little heads up: Al will return in the next chapter. Thanks to everyone who has enjoyed and who are still enjoying my story. I really appreciate your comments and your patience over the last year as I wrote it and continue to write it. But alas, as the saying goes: All good things must come to an end, and that includes stories. I'm starting to bring everything together now, and the ending will be nothing less than brilliant! |
 agent000 2006-12-28 . chapter 27Heh, I just finally caught on that you'd updated, lol...and how long has it been since you had done so? LOL! Leave it to say I'm hopeless, don't even notice the obvious when I check my e-mail every day, hehe. *shakes head* Anyway...
Good couple of chapters, but I'm hoping that the plot starts moving along soon. The fight scenes are good, but I want to see something different happen, lol? Anyway, hope that you update soon! Take care! |