haha i always thought i was the only one who thought obi-wan and padme should get together, but apparently im wrong. you should write another chapter!

very nice!

This is the only good Obi/Padme on it appears. Much love to you for writing it! I love this:

"Padmé dreams of giving birth to a galaxy. She looks and it burns her eyes. The colors are the same cold blue as their lightsabers, both of them, and then everything is red until she opens her eyes to find the sun in her face, morning."

Very beautiful.

hey good job. it is really a story you should write more of.

Wonderful. Your writing captures perfectly the confusion, guilt and longing that such a situation would bring to them. This piece is delicate and lovely to read, even though filled with melancholy. Also, thanks for giving Padmé some much-needed depth. :)

Hey, I like this story. I hope you'll continue with it. Interesting to see where it's going. :)