wow that was good i loved it please update soon do a prequel with the pariah dark story that would be awsome il oved it

good

KAWAII! I loved this fic so very very much! It was like the Episode I watched on t.v! Except everyone's older and it ends differently, but still awesome! *Huggles fic*

I like this version better than the episode! lol

*her face is purple then she releases a sigh of relief* ok must you put THAT much suspence in just maybe 3 pages? *sighs* any way... i read this i love this... can you PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, give me the 3rd chapter? PLEASE? MUST I CONTINUE BEGGING YOU?

Oh, Hailey is so cute! No Clockwork stopping time this time. Ha. That's a twist.

I love both chapthers! The story is coming to end and love is wining big time. I hope danny and sam's little girl is ok. I think if he stop evil danny without clockworks help then he is no longer lives in any timeline or out of timeline. This time suff mess with your head. I still think jack was a great dad to danny and I never belive maddie will marry vald even if jack is dead. Did you hear about the new danny phantom show that is post to air may the 5? It is a D/S thing for sure. Sam gets a new boyfriend and danny takes it real bad which means he has a bad case of the geen eyes. I hope you watch it to. Update soon! You rock!

O! i LIKE that! is Haley going to do Jazz's job of saving Danny? (aka when she used the fenton peeler on Dan Phantom and revieled him...) CONTINUE OR ELSE!

nice story! iTS REALLy good!

*rolls eyes* you just HAD to point out the obviouse right? lol oh and just remeber... if you don't continue... my mob will haunt you...

Good chapter, exellent on the quotes. so its going to end just like the movie itslef? update again soon!

Great chapter, I loved it.

Great chapter!

this fic is exactly like the movie and I have seen it more than once and also that the future ghosts are so pathtic and wimpy like their present selves.

your fellow author,

GK [Gundamknight]

I like very much. Hahahah Danny and Sam