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| Daetor 2008-03-10 ch 18,  | abuseI decided to review this even though it's completed, for the simple reason that I found it to be quite an interesting fic which was worth my time and I'd recommend it to anyone(in certain age limits of course). I have to say that the characters seemed well within their normal behavior, I can't say that they were OOC for the simple reason that people change, including disturbed individuals like those from the Eva cast and especially after an event such as Third Impact. Another reason for which I like this fic is that I'm a S/A fan to the core so I wish you good luck with any other fics you're writing. |
| J 2007-02-22 ch 18, anon. | abuseOverall a sweet story. It's kind of nice to see a slight change of character is Asuka, although she still retains most of her... more violent characteristics. I especially liked the idea that Gendo became much more affectionate towards Shinji. My only complaint is the relationship between Rei and Kaworu. It was underdeveloped, and at times, unnecessary. I think that you should either develop it fully, or exclude it completely. Not that Kaworu destroying the phone didn't make a funny scene... :) |
| bigguy1234 2006-07-22 ch 18, | abusethis story was awsome write more like it keep up the work |
| Necrokon 2006-07-10 ch 18, | abuseThat was a really good story. I especially like the way you stick to the relationship between Shinji and Asuka and don't waste too much time on other characters. If you're writing another story do the same thing. I hate it when people talk about stuff besides Shinji and Asuka. |
| GrizzlyBiscuit 2006-07-09 ch 6, | abusethat outtake is so messed up, a bong in the shape of unit 01? ... Can I get one of those for myself? strictly for a collection of sorts... |
| GAT-X101 2006-07-07 ch 5, | abusethe part with kawrou in his apartment u know the part with the father, the son, and the holy ghost in latin, well u ever seen the movie The Boondock Saints? well any ways good story. |
| TearsOfHurt13 2006-06-26 ch 18, | abuseop lol well i loved this story alot hey actally reply to at least one of my reviews |
| TearsOfHurt13 2006-06-26 ch 17, | abusewell i'm gonna miss this story i loved it but hey thank god you started on a new one |
| TearsOfHurt13 2006-06-26 ch 12, | abusehm what were they doing in rei's apartment |
| TearsOfHurt13 2006-06-26 ch 10, | abusei perfer fluff over fight lol |
| TearsOfHurt13 2006-06-26 ch 8, | abuseok i am fully scared now as to what the hell goes on in your mind when you write these funny as hell outtakes |
| TearsOfHurt13 2006-06-26 ch 7, | abusegrenade? lol |
| TearsOfHurt13 2006-06-25 ch 6, | abusegah! this so rocks! |
| TearsOfHurt13 2006-06-25 ch 5, | abusegendo laughing? i see why thats an outtake lol it's fine for a small chuckle but... |
| TearsOfHurt13 2006-06-25 ch 4, | abusegods i love the out tacks |