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| C DeMikols 2008-07-19 ch 34,  | abuseI submit: this is so cute! i love it alot, it made me think of a one-shot idea. actually!! Sometimes your spacing is a littled cluttered though, you can double return after each line so that it comes out better spaced for . Just a tip. |
| DiamondOasis 2007-03-31 ch 1, | abuseI love this story |
| bbissocute 2007-03-21 ch 34, | abusevery nice. i really like the way you made 'gar' and 'rae' s personalitys. keep up the good work. bbissocute |
| morelove 2007-03-17 ch 34, | abuseihtgliyh |
| Agent of the Divine One 2006-11-14 ch 34, | abuse"It's interesting. Adults say that the days you are young are the best days of your life. It is true in one sense. That you have your parents standing before you to absorb the blows and they let you feel the wind for the trials to come. Childdren are blessed because they have time to appreciate first-hand what adults must admire from afar." Me Thank you for writing. I will attend to your stories as long as I can. :) |
| Mad Mauser 2006-11-11 ch 21, | abuseWell, it's been awhile since I've caught up on the 'Family' series. I'm back though, and it's still looking just as great as it did when I left. Awesome job. |
| romance rocker 2006-11-10 ch 34, | abusei was shocked you had written so much in one day!but now i understand!these where so cute i want to draw a chibi comic with them!don't worry it's only in my head these are YOUR stories!plus your probably not into chibi's...anyway continue writing you gots my fan fic love and support! |
| Shay Bo Bay 2006-11-10 ch 34, | abusewow that was alot of updates i enjoyed them alot! |
| beanrox 2006-11-10 ch 34, | abuseHa-hmm...Sweet. Short. A bit sugary, but hey. |
| Hoppy-chan 2006-11-10 ch 18, | abuseYou need to add more. Of course, since you have about 30 other chapters by now, nothing I say will make a difference one way or another. Boosted by caffeine, Naolin reads on. ~Naolin |
| Hoppy-chan 2006-11-10 ch 13, | abuseAh-heh. I want a demon-in-a-box. Or, as is the case, vase. 'The peices'- pieces ~Naolin |
| Hoppy-chan 2006-11-10 ch 12, | abuseI offer chocolate, even if it's been the better part of a year since you wrote this chapter. That was a cute one. ~Naolin |
| Hoppy-chan 2006-11-10 ch 10, | abuseArcs are great, arcs are fun, acrs are fun for everyone. Go, arcs! ~Naolin |
| Hoppy-chan 2006-11-10 ch 6, | abuseAh-heh. Kids are fun. And evil. But mostly fun. ...When they're not trying to bite you. Gah, bad babysitting memories. ~Naolin |
| Hoppy-chan 2006-11-10 ch 3, | abuse'I think he starting crashing his cars together'- 'he's starting to-', 'he started'. Heh. I want a giant playset too... ~Naolin |