Reviews for The First Time

Reviews For: The First Time

tontto 2008-01-01 ch 1,	abusex3 So cute, but the ending was quite surprising.. o_o
laussica 2006-12-23 ch 1,	abuseoh that was so cute i love the ending funny as hell! loved it 11/10
Rocks Won't Fly 2006-07-24 ch 1,	abuse'A moment later, hundreds of marines attacked.' Brilliant. Especially the ending. You rock. You just do.
Kutsu 2006-07-10 ch 1,	abuseAh! Why are there so few reviews? This is bizarre. I keep reading so many great stories in this section, but they all have so little attention! Which is odd since the last time I checked the fanbase for yaoi and fanfiction was pretty damn big. Eh, oh well. What can you do. I'm sure this story has had about 20 page views regardless. I loved your story. You kept both Zoro and Sanji in character, and made the situtation work without becoming cliche or forcing the characters' personalities to change in the name of the plot. Great work. I'm not sure if you still use this account, since I'm just one of those people who go through all the archives in any data-base when my interest is peaked, but if you do, I hope you continue writing! -grin-
Away From Sanity 2006-03-06 ch 1,	abuseThis one-shot definetly deserves more than eight measly reviews. It was one of the better ones, anyway. Great job on the ending, by the way. - X3
Rapha7 2006-03-05 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this one. It was very under the surface...of the normal One Piece madness...
Tankar 2006-02-18 ch 1,	abuseXDXDXD Until the end, the story for me was just a bunch of yaoi-fan-girl giggling at the fact that; well, it was yaoi. . . But that last line. . . "A moment later, hundreds of marines attacked." I was just like omfg-rflmao XD Lol x_x Funneh. . . Very funneh. . . Hehe^^ I love your SxZ stories x_x I do hope you're still writing them ^^ Ciao~ Love love, -tankar
Texxacopolis 2005-12-25 ch 1,	abuseYare, yare... I really do love all of your work. Of course...I haven't read all of your work yet, only most of it, and I can say the ones I have read were pretty damn good, so I'm just going to go out on a limb and assume that all the rest of your stuff is pretty damn good, too. ^^ I love your sense of humor. Really cracks me up all the time.
tsukia in a bottle 2005-12-03 ch 1,	abuseHILARIOUS.
Lotus-chan 2005-12-01 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant, as always. I absolutely love your Zoro/Sanji stuff because no one can pull them off quite as well as you can. Simply brilliant. ^_^
Chibimono Akuno 2005-12-01 ch 1,	abuseThat is so them. It really is. All the foul language and name calling and just them. Perfect. And the irony of the marines attacking after Sanji went to sleep, not when Zoro sleeps. Damn, that was perfect. And hot. Very hot. Thank you very much for a good read!
Chisara Notell 2005-11-30 ch 1,	abusegrin Me likey! You are very skilled in writing this pairing. I have enjoyed all of them. Keep up the good work! ^-^ Oh, yeah: The last part made me crack up! XD Nice.
tori007otaku 2005-11-30 ch 1,	abuse(laughs hard enough to hack up a vital organ) WHOA! That was, like, the GREATEST ending to any fanfic I have ever read in the history of time. Ever. XD See? this fanfic was so funny and romantic and well-written and wonderful, it has taken away my ability to type articualte sentences. WHOO! I was a little skeptical at the summary, which, in all honesty, seemed a little silly, but wow. Just...wow. XD You MUST write me some more of this stuff, I'm faving it..Keep writing! ^.^

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