wat? wat da ya mean ya dont lyk it nemore? ya cant just stop ryt der! all dat info building up on sumn big den ur just gonna stop? dats not ryt...please please please dont stop der...its going great...a little slow but its really great.

please update soon...

so i've read and loved! falcon is wicked. i need more, more i say, i may get withdrawal symptons other wise. i think i may only be slightly obessed with anything un-natural or super human. oh i well i better go. other wise i will write for ever and ever and ever and ever about the brillance that is lani!

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i've not read it yet, but i have a feeling i've read it before, i can't remeber. any way it's you so i know it will brilliant!

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:) like this alot. CARRY ON plz. :P
yay
luv Xia

hey, the story is still cool, plz do add to it.
I think maybe an incident with Rogue would be cool, i mean, she really is the only one who can stop this girl (appart from Xavier, and u sed he ws reluctant!)
keep on going!

He more please lani, ive read this part already. lol. That Scott- asngst things also sound good...

I know you're only familiar with the movie, but I'm pretty sure Jean can fly. Being the powerful and smart mutants that they are, I think they would have figured that out already.

'the only thin*g*', not 'thin*k*'

"I am him '**' though"

Neat. Intriguing. Still some spelling things, but mostly stuff the spell check wouldn't catch because they're real words, just the wrong ones. Glad to finally be seeing some plot. And didn't X2 rock? If the ending made you sad, then I'd say you're not very familiar with the X-Men universe. *evil grin* Heehee...I can't wait for the next movie.

Ah, this is interesting. And I do like the first chapter changes, it's less distracting to read. For this chapter, there were a few spelling errors. The ones that jump out at me are where it says she puts her hands on her 'hops' and right before that where it says she was newly 'bought' and again where they ask her to 'sat' for a night. It's an odd little paragraph. ;-) It was funny how she kept calling Professor X Baldy. Guess she doesn't know who he is.

yippy! u updated hahahaha ahem aw poor Falcon! Yes i am aware its the x-men universe lol anyhoo i hope she stays and she doesnt run away again *growls* STAY WOMAN! lol just update really fast or i might blow a fuse *crackle* o.O! =D

OOh! This is so good! I just love it! Please continue with this! I like Falcon's attitude. Update now! =D

Hey, she is a smart **! It reminds me of my seventh grade spanish class! Keep goin!

liked it.

this is really gud!!! = jeez, girl, dont u evr get tired of reviwes!!!!!!

Well, it's not much of a story to review. It looks like it has potential and you've got the beginnings of an interesting character. The only thing I would note is that you seem to throw that bad word in just for the sake of having it. I would suggest toning it down and not using it unless there was a good reason.