that was awesome!

Btw temari is the oldest sibling not the middle, that's kanky

Nozes! Poor hina! T^T

i absolutely loved this story! i think you can take great pride to your writing, and i bow down humbly to your skills.
i loved it especially that everyone was still so in character. no OOC'nes!!
just one thing though, you wrote down that Anikari's temperature was back to perfect at 97 degrees Celsius...
i don't know if that's an typ-o or not but the correct amount you are looking for here is 37. i do hope you know that 100 degrees is the temperature to make water boil... that would not be a pretty sight, for Anikari to have a temperature of 97 degrees...
otherwise great story! and now i'm deffinetely of to read the 'sequel'

Okay,Okay.This review im about to write...type has no real significance to the story(though its really good so far).But my opinion.
Anyway,If i had been Hinata after he said the hidden leaf village was was weak,i would have been like..

"B*tch!Didnt we BEAT you AND your siblings at the exams..TWICE(Sasuke,Shino and Naruto count to)AND foil your plans after OUR OLD ** hokage beat the crap out of YOUR Orochimaru.Yeah thats what i thought.Talking about MY village like THAT!You must not know!!...Sorry i just had to say that.It just nagged at me for some REALLY strange reason...Im weird like that...Anyway luvin it so far!^^Cant wait to read the rest!

damn! what a story ^_^ gotta love it

*Heavy sigh* Oh My God. . . That was. . How am I going to explain it?

KAWAI. .. . *Squealing* [I think that's how those anime characters express their likeness into something ^^].

You describe Gaara just like what I always imagine, cold yet warm, rough yet soft, a demon yet beautiful. Thank you for doing the sequel, I don't know what i'm gonna do if u don't. ^0^


ambrosia-empress

i annot read it now so im pasting it on a word document dont worry i wont steel it but its so i can read it over and over if i like it please understand ill get back to you on my real review asap ps i will read dark innocence and do the same thing i swear iwont do anything bad to them well i might edit them so i can read them easer im so glad you understand if you have any questions email me at

SUCH a GREAT story!
Is this sorta au? Like Deidara didn't come for Gaara and Gaara's still all emo even after Naruto.
Oh! And is Sasuke with Orochimaru?

odd

I love the story so much!1

Ahh! It's over? *going now to look for a sequel* Ne, sorry! I'm an impatient person!

that was shocking, a little gross, but still...

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGMOGMOMG! I HAVE TO READ DARK INNOCENCE IF PALE COMPARISON IS SO AWESOME!

i loved it! this is 1 of the best stories i have ever read. :)