That was really good.
I loved it.
:D

lovely story! and funny really. great use of humor and their interaction at the end was wonderful, simple yet life changing somewhat! great story! and love DHr! woh!

I demand more! Good chap! hehe. Dont know why you dont have more reviews but...its awesome!

wow... just... wow ^__^
I love the way you write. I could spend the whole day reading your FanFictions.
angel.yuka ^.~

wow, how do you not have more reviews? this was amazing. incredibly powerful!

An interesting thought flow. Which one are you? Are you visiting this world in which you don't belong, or do you belong to this world and have simply grown used to it, and therefore tired of it?Do you make the decision to help or are you instinctually nice?
Judging from the tone at the start of this brain storm, you sound like you're slightly above the reader. With holding a certain tibit of knowledge and therefore power over us. You already know the answers to these questions. You're just trying not to. Or you're trying to educate us. Scorning us so that we stive to be your equal and eventually your better.
Does this belong in the Harry Potter section or would it be more fitting under the original section? Is it more about Hermione and Draco, or about you and one of your female friends? I believe it is about the later.
This is certainly not your best work, nor your worst. Random but ordered and refreshing in both. It almost seems cliched in parts. All in all GET BACK TO COTC!!
Molle

wow that is deep very very very good couldn't of said it better my self