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| Hiraishin -Judgement- XIII 2006-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseyaoi sucks and so does this fic! death to all yoai and obsessed fangirls(and fangays) who write them! we the XI will make sure of that! -adds author to hitlist- |
| ghost 2006-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is a piece of crap death to all yoai |
| Daitai Otonashii Ookami 2006-07-02 ch 2, | abuseOh, poor Sasuke. Misunderstood!Sai sounds good. If you're still looking for a beta, I'd be happy to do it for you. My e-mail address is ValleysEnd at aim dot com. --cj |
| SweetKatie97 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abuseI think you should continue, just put a little more detail in it and make it a little less vauge, i could barley undersetand it. but i get it so far, it's pretty good, =3 |
| AcidTart 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! I can't wait till the next Chappy. Update soon pleasse! ^-^ |
| Love Squared 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseo...hehehehe!what's a beta? ur story is interesting. if sasuke had control of his life wouldn't he still be in Konoha?mleh w/e UPDATE soon |
| Hikari no Kurai 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseoo, i love the jealous sasuke and naive naruto fics! this is great, but who is sai and is he naruto's current lover now? PLEASE CONTINUE! |
| Yum2 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseOkay... Interesting. I want more... It's true that it's a little wierd that Sai would work for Orochimaru since he had been recommended by some old man I don't remember the name... But not impossible since the man that recommanded him wanted the Hokage's place and didn't have it because they chose Sarutobi over him and he hates Sarutobi (even though now he is dead.) This man can have allied with Orochimaru for some twisted reasons... after all they both hate Sarutobi, both wanted to be Hokage and were denied not because they were not strong enough but because of their way of thinking !! And for people thy though were inferior to them... So continue !! By the way, Is Naruto going out with Sai now ? Or are they just friend ? Can't wait for the rest !! Hope you will be able to update soon !! |
| whiterose03 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abusean interesting start...can't wait to see where this goes |
| Pazzie 2005-12-01 ch 1, | abuseYou know... he could be doing that, but we don't know yet do we? Ah, I think Sai makes a perfect replacement for Sasuke xD Poor Sasurin... better show up soon or your boyfriend is goint to be taken away. |