im really enjoying this story very much

i think u have willy down to a t and i feel for charlie and i like the punk/goth teens i like oddly i know someone like that
and i see u like Micheal Jackson nice
and i like the little notes u leave at the end of the chap

hope u update soon

heheeh that is good I cant waite to read the rest post soon or I will ...gosh idk just post soon

more please!~

This was one of the greatest stories ever besides the fact that it was slash, in my opinion slash for Wonka is too OOC, he hates contact but this story is like Strawberry flavored chocolate coated fudge! OR SWUDGE!

Fantastic I look forward to more that's if you are still continuing this I really hope you are.
Hoping for a new chapter and congratulations on having an amazing story so far

RAWR. Marry me.

please write more

This is posativly wonderful!! :) lol I just love how you dressed Willy in goth clothes. lol And I know that it has been a longt time since you've updated this one, but please update soon!! Btw, that moment in the last chappie? I want mooree!! lol :) Oh, and I want more ellsworth. hehe Anyway, please tell me you haven't forgotten this story!! Cuase i heart it. lol

~Kassie

Good God, I really like this story! Thinking of Wonka in all white/silver is most interesting, being as I think he looks best in dark colours. I'm worried about what the snot-faced Prudence and Sheldon are up to, and perchance whatever's with principal Granger has to do with Willy and donations or, dare I say, 'bribes'? I suppose I'll just have to wait and find out. =D

Wow its awsome so far, i like how youve put all the different elements of the films and other things to make one.its cool
and did you get "Miss Sourthern Belle pageant three years running!” from my name is earl were missi pyle the actress that plays violets mom plays the mom of a beuty pagent princess ? cause it sounds quite similar

I LOVE ELLSWORTH! He just remands me a lot of someone I know so well...ME!! His style of personality pretty much sum me up a bit! Same thing with Lulu!

It seems Mr. Wonka is a befuddled man. I guess that's what makes him loveable! And Miss. Beauregarde is a very interesting character...it all makes sense now why she's so...perfect!

I think this is my favorite chappie. And now that I've finally finished reading what's posted here I'm moving on to ur other stories! If this ever continues expect a review from me!

update update update * dances*

This is such a great story! Everyone is perfectly portrayed in my opinion and you're always making me laugh with your strange little world. You could rival Wonka! I absolutely love this.

Go Michael Jackson! I am still, even with all the controversy, an avid MJ fan. I've liked him since I was born practically. I'm really glad you put in references and stuff; it's always fun to see him popping up where you don't expect (like in CATCF fics)... Oh, and yay for Foamy! Whee!

*glomps Ellsworth* Yay! Goth boi!

Am I the only person who noticed Granger, even though you keep pointing it out? *looks through reviews* Well, only one other person has mentioned it. ^^ Charlie's principal is Hermione's uncle! I never thought about the obvious (or should be obvious to someone as weird and obsessive as me) connection between Hermione (both dentists) and Dr. Wonka before this story. Now I feel inspired to write a genuine crossover between the two. HP needs a little touch of Willy Wonka genius, I think. Anyway, as one of the world's most obsessive HP fans, I thank you for your reference.

Since I will probably forget to review and ask seperately (it's 2:33 in the morning here right now), please update 'It Is Scary'! I cannot describe the effect it's had on me! Not a bad effect, if you don't think every time I get on the computer I go straight to IIS from my fave link on my start menu before realizing that I've read everything you've put up so far is a bad effect... ^.~ It's sad but true... That's what IIS has done to me... Please update! And update this, too, please?

I want a giant stuffed Wonka! I would most diffently sleep with it...^_~

Food fight are fabulous! And the sploosh thing I have heard of...I think i experienced it once with cream cheese...Too much information! And where di you ever find the name Wilburforce? That's a spiffy name! And I love how Ms. Kane uses it and acts like a total **...I heart her.

Ah...the mystery of the bruises is clear now! I was getting worried there for a minute. And the little "taste-testing" scene those two was beautifully written. I'm a big fan and writter of erotica. Even though it wasn't hard core it was one of my favorite erotic scenes that I've ever read. I applaude you! The sexy tension between them is so thick you could cut through it with a knife!

*gasps* Some was watching? Man...I'd give anything to be that lucky person!

YAY! Mike is back! *sniffs the air* Do I detect the sweet aeroma of sexual tension between Mike and Violet?! *shifts eyes* Im really glad he's in the story. He's my foavorite rotten kid. Don't know why . . .

The image of Chez Wonka was hilarious! And I love how Charlie gets so easily jealous of Tanya. It's so cute! And I continue to like Ms. Kane. She reminds me a little bit of me . . . except I kinda like the chocolatier! And I love how you have all these hidden thingies in here! I got most of them! WOOT!

"He blathers on about his classmates like you do about **!”
“You ride Charlie rather hard, don’t you?”
“Stop that. How am I supposed to get this done if you keep popping all the cherries!”
“I haven’t popped ALL of the them. And besides…that’s what they’re for. Everyone wants the cherry, it’s the dessert part of the dessert.”
“Y-you sucked out all of the juice.”

YAY FOR PERVERTED MINDLESSNESS! *rolls on floor* But seriously . . . I really like the cherry scene between Wonka and Charlie. It was so sweet . . . even though my sick twisted mind took some of it the wrong way . . . hehe! And it'd be so freakin' sweet to see a Wonka cartoon! The movie and book just scream out for color! What better way than say . . . an anime cartoon? It'd be even cooler if there was a Wonka magna *sighs*

As always your a great writer and continue to do a great job! Your talent continues to enthrall me.