OMG ROFL that was hilarious!

When I first read this story I thought, 'I wonder what Mr. Wonka could be thinking of...'

This second time I get the feeling that Wonka was totally clueless. They're talking about two totally different things.

You don't have evil thoughts, Mr. Wonka!

Of course I do!

...I think Wonka got it ALL wrong!!

Dang-it! I wanna know what Willy's bad thoughts are!

wow that was amazing I really enjoyed that you are a wonderful writer

I was hesitant about reading this, since I'm skeptical about reading in new genres, but this really blew me away. I loved the intro with Charlie's parents, the descriptions of the two of them were remarkable and realistic. The ending was hiliarous, Mr. Wonka was perfectly in character with his witty comments and abstract behaviour. Anyways, best of luck to you!

KyaKyAKyA! That was cute! he he.. Though they could have kissed, then snogged, then they could have went further..and further! Hi hi! But I really am curious now, what evil thoughts does Mr.Wonka have..Hm... I hope they are abit like Charlies! He he! More intense but still the same! He he! I'm a perv, I know! Still CuTe!

Great story!

good story

Oh, how cute! After 'Cravings' I didn't know what to expect. This surprised me!

Bravo, oncore, that was AWSOME! As always you are a stupendous writer! Please write more I am dieing to find out what happens in ALL of your stories you are a fantastic! Thank you for the miraculous read! Willy is just so cool and that was very cute! :)

More! More! More! (It's not just chockolath that can be adictive... :P)

I like this fic A LOT. One of my favorite parts is Mrs. Bucket's lecture about reality to her husband. That part was beautifully written. And I loved it Charlie hugged Mr. Wonka. It made me go "AWW!" It takes a lot for me to do that! The chemistry between those two was great. And I love it when Mr. Wonka says, "I think everyone is entitled to at least one tiny, little wicked thought.” But does really have to be one? Maybe about a million tiny, wicked thoughts would suffice? lol

You're still an amazing writer. It looks like you found yourself a faithfull reviewer to all of your work! ^_^

yay! this was awesome! i loved it so much! it was really well written and everyone was so IC :D yey. great job, i wish there was more though :3 heehee!

hey i loved ur story pleae don't tell me it was one shot you should contuine it's very interesting and VERY GOD update PLEASE i wanna know what willy's bad thought was h he he he
lol
Cheers
Crmy

Oh this was nice! You did the characters very well and I adore the scene with Wonka and Charlie. It was just so ridiculously cute that made me want to cuddle it and squeeze it and... well, I guess I'm going off a bit here. ^_^ Whoops, sorry. Great fic, though!

This is EXTREMELY well-written, and I enjoyed it thoroughly! I really, really hope ye decide to continue it, as I and I'm sure several other people would continue to read it!
I think you pulled this off really well, considering it's a very hard plotline to do well and not have it come off as contrived or simply creepy. I saw neither of those here, and thought it was just really sweet and believably awkward. I also liked that Charlie never actually SAID what his evil thought was; it was left open and unresolved, but also realistic. I mean, I think it was a believable conversation - it would BE that awkward and nerve-wracking.

x3 Plus there were some truly awesome lines in there that made for some very surprised giggles at perfect moments.

I also loved the dynamics between Mr. and Mrs. Bucket; that was really sweet and I just loved that you focused on them a little. ^_^ I like it when people write well about usually-ignored characters.

Please continue, if ye intended to! *eagerly awaits*