Oh, come on! That's mean- not updating for well over a year! Especially with the way you left it... It'll be interesting to see how Nancy meets up with Frank and Joe. Can't wait for the next update!

Ooh, very good story so far. Such a sad plot too -- baby-sellers? That's awful. But yeah, great story. The characterizations, the OCs, the way everything ties in . . . very great.

I will admit I tried reading this once before but was turned off by the idea of Frank and Nancy not working out. But then I was reading it all again, and reading more chapters, and I realized that there was a deeper explanation for it, and it was still an amazing story either way.

Though I dunno how I feel about Ned and Nancy. Blah.

I beg of you to not let this story die. Usually I don't read anything that Hasn't been updated in awhile, but your writing is just too good to ignore.

I cannot believe that Nancy might give Ned another chance. I might be wrong since I'm not American, but when kidnapping is involved isn't the FBI supposed
to be involved? If so, I hope that Frank and Joe can dig up enough evidence to support their claim. Poor guys.

I'm glad that Nancy is getting involved in a mystery when she is psychologically messed up. Solving mysteries is who she is. Also, coming across the Hardy',
well I can't see that as a bad thing.

Im loving this! The mental side-effects of the ordeal Nancy went through are really interesting, and all the action with the Hardy's is nice too. But i hope Nan joins in on it soon too! Please please please update soon!!

+dares to dream+

Please update soon...This story is great.

This is a great mystery so far. I hope you'll update soon!

can't wait to read more, update soon!

that was so sad, i actually have tears.

And the plot thickens! I can't believe those thugs got away with all of the evidence and their only suspect -- what a huge blow to their case! You did such an excellent job with all of the dialogue in this chapter, especially that between the Hardys and De Groot, as well as Nancy with Carson and Hannah. In the Hardys' case, you made it evident what a fine line they're walking -- they don't want to tread on De Groot's territory, but at the same time, their frustration continues to mount as the case continues to go unsolved. With Nancy, it was so good to hear Carson and Hannah express their concern for her, without attempting to stifler her. All too often, the books didn't deal with the ramifications Nancy's career had on her family. I'm so glad you showed their worry for her here.

You've left us on quite the pinnacle here, and I can't wait to see where you go from here! You know I'll be waiting ever so eagerly for an update! :)

As always, you never cease to amaze. Well done! Looking foward to the next chapter! :-)

*shivers* They broke into the morgue to steal the body? Eeww!

So obviously they're dealing with some very organized and professional people. Methinks this is much, much bigger than a local baby-selling ring. Much bigger. Yikes.

I don't like that conversation at the end between Brad and the boss. Sounds like the boys have even bigger targets on their backs now. And I hope they don't try to get rid of Rosie, too. Hopefully they won't be able to find him.

I feel sorry for Nancy. That would drive me crazy to have everyone constantly "studying" me. She seems to be taking it well, though. I'm glad that she's not going to let it keep her from trying to solve a mystery. Good ol' Nancy!

Thanks for the update, and I hope you are feeling better. :)

Glad you're back writing the story! very good chapter. i feel sorry for her dad and hannah, she seems determined to get involved in the case when she should be recouperating from the fallout of her last case.

Oh GEEZ girl! You're killing me here!! Can you give us more? I can't believe we're already into chapter 15 here! (This must be punishment for me accidently ignoring you the other night when I forgot to shut down IM. Again. ^_^)

Man! There wasn't a huge amount of action here, but you've given us a bit more to go on. Well, maybe not, but you've certainly stirred the waters back up. Just what is going on? Who in the WORLD would break into a morgue, steal a dead body, lots of evidence, break into a police station (for crying out loud!!) and spring a guy, plus MORE evidence?!?!

You better be coming up with some answers soon! This fic has the potential to keep me dying for more, yet dreading every update as you slowly reveal more details to us as to just what is going on. This is some heavy stuff some sicko has started. I can't wait to read more!

(My hands are actually kinda shaking... ^_^)

Ok, I believe I'm review # 127! Not like it matters, but felt like typing it...anyways, I LOVE IT SO FAR! Please don't stop now and I am absolutely begging you to make this a Nancy/Ned story! They are my favorite couple and good for each other. Plus he's apologized and said he's willing to wait. Anyway, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

As always, wonderful job. I can't wait to see what you have in store next. I'm really curious about the doctors... Loved it.