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| Gemstone 2006-11-29 ch 12, anon. | abuseI read the warning but I still HAD to read it and now I'm desperate for more! |
| Cass 2006-05-15 ch 12, anon. | abuseTHIS? Was just amazing. I just read all the chapters at once, and about cried when I realized that it wasn't complete. Do you have plans to finish it? Your characterization is PERFECT and Ican almost hear their voices in my head. |
| celadon 2006-03-04 ch 11,  | abuseI'd give a lot for more of this story. |
| celadon 2006-02-08 ch 12, | abuseThis is wonderful. |
| mouse8 2006-01-27 ch 12, | abuseThe plot definitely thickens. I love that line "You always go through my stuff" You capture the sibling relationship so beautifully, conjuring up a depth to the brothers. I love it! |
| NidrianRuuthane 2006-01-23 ch 12, | abuseuh-oh, Busted! Great Chapter, i look forward to reading the next! |
| merryw 2006-01-21 ch 12, | abuseOh my gosh! Don took that rather well. Thank goodness too, because I think he really needs Charlie now! |
| Rinne 2006-01-21 ch 12, | abuseVery cool three chapters. |
| chaser1 2006-01-21 ch 12, | abuseLove it. Please update soon. |
| gymkidz2000 2006-01-21 ch 12, | abuseNice on the last two chapters. Does this make Don a suspect? I hope not |
| Stealth Dragon 2006-01-21 ch 12, | abuseGood chapter here. Powerful yet subtle, without overdoing the emotion. Sorry if I sound like a film critic or something, but couldn't help it. |
| 3rdgal 2006-01-21 ch 12, | abuseYay, two chapters at once! I really liked them. You just knew Charlie couldn't resist. I like that you used the "You have cool stuff line" from the show. I wonder how many times Charlie's actually said that? :) I'm looking foward to more! |
| D. Lerious 2006-01-21 ch 12, | abuseWhat a sad last line!:(. Loved how Don was protective of michelle.:) great work! |
| D. Lerious 2006-01-21 ch 11, | abuseawesome chapter! I'm off to read ch12~. :) |
| D. Lerious 2006-01-20 ch 10, | abusegreat Chapter! :) I hope things get resolved! |