It was very entertaining. It kept me wondering what crazy thing was going to happen next. The ending was logical, but I'm glad the story doesn't end here. I can use more of your Shego and Kim.

I see now why I like Shego, we have something in common. We are both people that only a mother could fuck up this much. Kim is certainly insane in a way that gives me the creeps but it does make the story more interesting.

the story has finally slipped across the fine line between insanity and humor... I actually got a good laugh out of it.

I'm kind of glad I didn't stop reading this insane creation a couple of chap's ago. It's showing signs of having a plot...

I like your take on Shego, she makes a good hard mean cop. Kim as the frustrating girl who keeps smiling is good too.

I adore your stories. I gotta ask though - did you get the beginning from the manga Tramps Like Us? The similarities are glaringly obvious, but it's a really good KiGo fic.

wow... Very good, a single chapter in their lives, wow. i am stunned at how wrapped up i am in this,. I can hardly wait to click the link to the next story.

This was really good. Utterly bizarre, but really good. I enjoyed the overall banter and the little insights into both Shego and Kim. Particularly how you didn't rush a romance. It was sweet and nice but I can't say I'm unhappy to see there is a sequel. Awesome!

I think this is the first story I've read where being someone's pet didn't sound so creepy. Great job :)

Loving the story so far although I was kind of looking forward to seeing Kim do a demonstration with Shego's mom. Great job :)

Well that ending was depressing. The story is very funny, and I love it, now on to the sequel.
-Kate

i love the story. youre an absolute genius, but theres one thing id like to say: you use too many transitional words. often, a simple comma will do much better than a "while", or "because". of course i dont have a lot of writng experience and youre obviously already VERY good, but i wanted to help in any way i can.

thanks! :)

im really liking the story so far. its hilarious and keeps you reading easily. plus theres very few out-of-character moments. still, here are just two critiques:
1. less adjectives (it doesnt flow as well when you use a bunch)
2. stop trying so hard to find synonyms and alternate names for things, it really also stops the flow

thank you! and i know youre into at least your fourth arc, so i dont know if youll even read this, but i just wanted to tell you. thank you for writing this, by the way, youre a really talented writer.

Just ran across this site after another one led me here, and really love this story arch. Just wanted to say so.

This is a very romantic story. Though an AU, I found the characterizations believable and quite endearing.

RE: Kim Possible:
Kim's desire to not have to make a lot of decisions rang true. I've known people in a similar situation - people under so much pressure from both their own and others' expectations that they just want to get away. In a similar fashion, I've heard and read about people in very stressful, authoritative jobs who, in their private lives, wished to be very submissive - since then they didn't have to make decisions.

I see why Kim is so drawn to Shego. Even in the end, when Shego wanted Kim to do something with her life, Shego didn't put Kim under any particular pressure to do a particular thing, unlike Kim's family, friends and others she met.

Also, I liked how Kim looks at the world, with just the act of living filled with wonder.

RE: Shego:
Neat idea for her to be a tough cop. Her "voice" sounded right - in my head I could hear Nicole Sullivan reciting her lines. I like the gradual progression of the story as Shego slowly realizes just how much her pet means to her.

Thanks for such a great piece of writing.

BTW, I just want to add that I subscribed in order to comment on this story.