Man SL you are one amazing writer. Im sure you've heard this a thousand times, but you should (if not already) become a full fledged writer, for god sake the world needs to read your work! I have read several of your stories (Vampire Kimmie, walking the line, Beast Within, to name a few) and each and every time im utterly blown away. You would do the world some good by making them read your professional work. Just something to ponder haha.

It was very entertaining. It kept me wondering what crazy thing was going to happen next. The ending was logical, but I'm glad the story doesn't end here. I can use more of your Shego and Kim.

I see now why I like Shego, we have something in common. We are both people that only a mother could fuck up this much. Kim is certainly insane in a way that gives me the creeps but it does make the story more interesting.

the story has finally slipped across the fine line between insanity and humor... I actually got a good laugh out of it.

I'm kind of glad I didn't stop reading this insane creation a couple of chap's ago. It's showing signs of having a plot...

I like your take on Shego, she makes a good hard mean cop. Kim as the frustrating girl who keeps smiling is good too.

I adore your stories. I gotta ask though - did you get the beginning from the manga Tramps Like Us? The similarities are glaringly obvious, but it's a really good KiGo fic.

wow... Very good, a single chapter in their lives, wow. i am stunned at how wrapped up i am in this,. I can hardly wait to click the link to the next story.

This was really good. Utterly bizarre, but really good. I enjoyed the overall banter and the little insights into both Shego and Kim. Particularly how you didn't rush a romance. It was sweet and nice but I can't say I'm unhappy to see there is a sequel. Awesome!

I think this is the first story I've read where being someone's pet didn't sound so creepy. Great job :)

Loving the story so far although I was kind of looking forward to seeing Kim do a demonstration with Shego's mom. Great job :)

Well that ending was depressing. The story is very funny, and I love it, now on to the sequel.
-Kate

i love the story. youre an absolute genius, but theres one thing id like to say: you use too many transitional words. often, a simple comma will do much better than a "while", or "because". of course i dont have a lot of writng experience and youre obviously already VERY good, but i wanted to help in any way i can.

thanks! :)

im really liking the story so far. its hilarious and keeps you reading easily. plus theres very few out-of-character moments. still, here are just two critiques:
1. less adjectives (it doesnt flow as well when you use a bunch)
2. stop trying so hard to find synonyms and alternate names for things, it really also stops the flow

thank you! and i know youre into at least your fourth arc, so i dont know if youll even read this, but i just wanted to tell you. thank you for writing this, by the way, youre a really talented writer.

Just ran across this site after another one led me here, and really love this story arch. Just wanted to say so.