|Reviews for Walking the Line|
| Von 12/4/07 . chapter 19
Bloody brilliant, that's all i can say about it. I've just started reading On a Short Leash and i'm glad to see it's long. Few small things though, grammar in places and the occasional missing word or two but that's to be expected really. Also i don't remember KP saying "Spanking" though i haven't seen it for a while or it could be an AU thing in that particulat universe.
Can't wait to read the rest of your stuff and keep it up.
| AthenaNoel 11/25/07 . chapter 19
SWEET! i love it! this is one of the very BEST Kim Possible stories i have ever read and i hope that the sequels are just as good!
| Rin Leonhart 9/22/07 . chapter 19
A little OOC, but overall I enjoyed it. Something different for a change :)
| Sick Minded Productions 8/23/07 . chapter 19
| ABCCJPTT 7/16/07 . chapter 19
At first mentioninig of Kim being a pet, I thought, "What the hell?"
But, you've made it VERY believable and I just couldn't stop reading. Now on to the sequels, which I'm very glad that there are some...
| minako366 7/11/07 . chapter 19
LOVED IT! Even more happy that there is more :D
| whowants2kno 7/9/07 . chapter 19
Ok at the begining the whole pet thing sounded way beyond fucked up but the farther on you go with it the more it makes sense so all in all it's been a pretty kickin' story so far.
| mad cow 7/6/07 . chapter 2
hi. remember me. mad cow. well i read the second one and id like to thank you,so thankyou, well im gonna go back to reading.
| mad cow 7/6/07 . chapter 1
this the best story i have ever read. thank god theres a 2 part. i love your wrighting so much that i think im going to forget about boys and marry your storries. do you think you could make our wedding cake.
| KamaRyu 6/17/07 . chapter 19
Wow, that's all I can say. 12 out of 10. Even though it is an AU, the characterization is still believable.
| Sora-Hikari 6/15/07 . chapter 19
This is seriously one amazing piece of work. I've read the entire series up to where you are right now in One in a Billion and I'm re-reading it now and enjoying it just as much as I originally had.
I remember when I first read this and their continuations I read through an entire day and then the night without stopping. I believe I had school the next day so I as forced to stop :P It's just that good.
I guess this is a thank you for writing this wonderful story so a lazy bum like me could sit in front the computer and read it _
| TriXter21 6/1/07 . chapter 1
Do you know what I just realized? I haven't reviewed any of your Walking the Line series. Oh, yes, I've read them all. Believe it or not, I read the whole series in around...a week, maybe? And that's just because I had a lot of tests that week in school. P I'm going to go and review ALL of the installments in the series, of course. But I just have to say...I love this series.
Kim can be a little OOC sometimes-but, really, what can you expect from an AU story?-but she's SO cute! P And, really, with this story, you make her seem so believeable, that it's hard to realize when she's being OOC P!
And Shego? What can I say? I'd tap that. Lol. Yes. I just said that. xD But, yeah. I just love this series.
I remember laughing and smiling every chapter in this story. And I really just have to say thank you for writing it! .
| Pretend2besome1 5/6/07 . chapter 19
*jaw dropped* this is…oh man, I’m speechless.
It’s weird in a good way also hilarious and made me confused LOL.
ROTFL! OMG! I can’t control my laughter anymore…what’s in Kim’s head anyway? She actually obeyed those stupid commands from Shego.
Wew….This fic got a lot of surprises! I like it and now I wanted a pet like that hahahaha.
If only you didn’t say there will be a sequel then I’ll be sad with then ending ;)
| Silvara rivana 5/5/07 . chapter 19
I like it a lot. will be interesting to see what happens next. I hope that shego and kim get to hook up and kim relises she can just be a world saver for her life.
| Natalie 5/3/07 . chapter 19
I don't know why I feel the need to write a review about a flamer's criticism of an AU story which I enjoy, but since nobody else is doing it, I must set this flamer/ranter straight about the Walking the Line saga by StarvingLunatic. The flamer also insulted SL's name and writing, both of which are not bad except in his delusional paralell universe.
BigJames321 is a ranting flamer whose poorly-written reviews fail to convince me of why, after reading your excellent AU saga, anyone would find Kim as somebody who has voluntarily given up her humanity to become Shego's "slave". Perhaps he would call me biased, because KiGo is my favorite pair in Kim Possible, and I find it odd that someone would not see that Kim and Shego are made for one another and favor the "canon" relationship of Kim and Ron. The flamer treats Kim as though she is a brain-damaged person who has "gave up HALF of her fundamental self so she can be the 'pet' of a nasty stranger" and as someone who is considered less than human. He uses capital letters to make some of his points, which are not only illogical, but appear to be poorly thought-out as well. "You can not justify treating another human being as an animal. Shego is being pandered to way too much by Betty Director, Kim's friends and anyone else who hears of Kim's status as a 'pet'." Shego is not treating Kim like an animal; Kim lives with Shego and is called her pet, yet she is treated like a human rather than an animal.
Also, the flamer commented that "Villians shouldn't win, no matter what," and "American heroes(like Kim) are unflinching in their determination to win, we do NOT QUIT! You made Kim Possible quit without a fight. That is horrifying and wrong." These quotes were not used together, but they basically indicate that the flamer lives in an idealized world...or he has been reading too many comic books. In the real world, people do give up without a fight. BigJames321, heroes give up as well. You may idealize American heroes, believing they should always win, but sometimes heroes don't win. Sometimes a hero does give up without a fight. What makes a hero a hero doesn't depend on if they never quit, it depends on their acomplishments.
For example, an American research scientist works for years on a all-types cure for cancer. She one day quits because it seems as though the fight against cancer is too tough for herself and her team to handle. At first, she gives up without a fight, but then gets back in the game because she feels as though she needs to help these people. Cancer is then wiped out around the world, and future generations of children will grow up asking what the disease is to their parents after they learn about it in school.
Shego has her bad moments, but she is an interesting character, and your criticisms of Shego's character are unfounded and based more upon actual dislike of Shego than anything else. You claim Shego is a pedophile, yet there is no evidence in the Walking the Line saga to indicate this. Another claim with a disturbing lack of evidence is that Kim is Shego's slave, which is what most people think a pet is. In the story, and subsequent stories that follow, Kim is not a slave.
What does BigJames321 have against pets? I have three dogs, and I treat them like they're my canine sisters. Most days, I feel more canine than human anyways, so this is not even a problem.
This man not only says he does not like people "corrupting" his canon, but he states that he will "defend" canon and he doesn't wish for anyone to write something that deviates from Disney's canon, which is therefore his canon. What made him the judge of KP canon, the world may never know.
Anyways, I just wanted to clear it up that I have nothing against BigJake321 or his opinions, I merely have something against his attack on a KiGo story simply because it is KiGo.
StarvingLunatic is an excellent KiGo writer, and I do not wish for SL to stop because of a few flames.
To BigJake321, events you have said happen in canon have not happened in my canon, which since I am now the judge of KP canon, will bring into "real" canon.