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Vanilla Raindrops
2009-12-03 . chapter 98
I am a bad person.

I am going to admit that I have been following this story for a while and I have not reviewed a single chapter. But this is just impossible to leave this way. This chapter is extremely satisfying in its own way. It's sweet with a light humorous touch and it was just, oh so perfect. The raw emotion in this chapter makes me squeal.

It has finally happened.

Heh, and it only took about 98 chapters. xD
selenityshiroi
2009-12-02 . chapter 98
I'm atrocious at reviews, but this chapter needs one.

I love this story and the way it deals with the characters and their emotions in a real and subtle way.

And this resolution was no different. The slow build up over the rest of this story had led wonderfully into this understated but, none the less, heartfelt moment. It absolutely perfect for the story and for the characters. Well done!
meisaku
2009-12-02 . chapter 98
amg, finally finally finally, so tender, thanks
policis
2009-12-02 . chapter 98
aie!
*blubbers in happiness*
I've been WAITING for this forever. Just like TIfa.

Just enough fluff and hesitation and Cloud speechlessness-slash-brief words to be delicious.


AIE! Kudos to you! Thank you!
suza
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
SQUE! There is such anxiousness and confusion and love and warm fuzziness in this chapter that I think my heart is melting!! It is amazing that you were able to get that depth of emotion in 1136 words.

What a perfect pre-Christmas chapter~ the love between Cloud and Tifa makes me all mushy and wanting to huggle my hubby close!
6StringSamurai13
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
AW!
.rEckLeSsLy.cOnFIneD.
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
Aw, this chapter was very sweet. I too have been waiting for this to happen! These two always make me smile!
deny.me.not
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
AMAZING.:)
FINALLY. :)
celticskyedancer
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
Aww. This chapter was so sweet. I really loved all the emotion in it between Cloud and Tifa.
Apakoha
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
...Like, seriously, it's the end now? After this chapter? Which was superb, by the way, it's one of the most well-written romance scenes, never even mind Cloti, I've ever read. :) Planning to write more?
un4getabl3mem0ries
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
Aww so sweet =] They finally "together"! ^^ I would love to see Yuffie & the children's reactions :P
Syzeria
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
“Th, that’s nice. Thank you. It’s nice to be thought of.”
^I melted there.

"Cloud desperately speculates where his brain has disappeared to because suddenly, he can find absolutely nothing to say. He can already picture Zack slapping his ghostly forehead in exasperation."
^I laughed all too loudly at Zack and Cloud's brain.

“I couldn’t leave this place even if I wanted to.”
^LOVE the double meaning in that one.

“...I said, don’t leave me.”
^ LOVE. Just––love. <3

~ “...I, I really need to know,” she begins, feeling like her heart was trying to drum its way out of her ribcage and wishing to all things divine that it’d //slow down//. “What you mean by that.”

Finally, he looks up, meets Tifa’s red-brown eyes...

And sees hope. ~

^ E!

That was probably the BEST chapter EVER! Gosh, I just want to squeeze you and your story, I'm so glad things are finally catching up to that thick blue-eyed wonder.

I had a terrible day, and this just baked me a gorgeous galore to replace my burnt and sizzling old cake.

Thank you thank you thank you! I will jump incessantly as I will stare at my inbox for forever in hopes of an update!

Un grand béser pour toi!
Kailla =)
silverdigger
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
Oh! Oh,oh,oh,oh! That's what I'm talkin' about! That's what we've all been waiting for! You are a great writer. I love you. Can we just all get married? Hey, everybody, party at C and T's! Hey, is this our Christmas present?
Nenhiril
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
aww that was such a sweet scene ^_^
Synchypn0tic17
2009-12-01 . chapter 98
Wow!This almost DOES feel pretty unreal! I had to go read this over twice to make sure I was reading right! And then I went ahead and read over Cloud's confession and the ending a few more times, only because this was too GOOD! I've been waiting for this moment to long and can't believe it's finally here! You've done a wonderful job, YunCyn. I just loved how he was taking f o r e v e r to just spit it out, but of course, Cloud wouldn't be Cloud if he really did just spit it out:P. I'll give him extra kudos for that kiss ;)

I'd like to know how everyone will react when they find out! Also curious to know how Cloud and Tifa will tell them too! And I think I'm getting way too excited and I need to calm down!

--Synchypnotic.
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