I like how you captured the characters. It makes complete sense that after the traumatic events at Kyoto, there would be some fallout and certainly some awkwardness. Especially for Hisoka; you've shown how difficult it is for him to make the transition from being alone to beginning to trust.

The only difficulty I had was in following the characters on occasion. I wasn't sure who was speaking or who was doing the action. Perhaps a few more cues?

Anyway...very enjoyable. :D

Alright, I know you hvan't updated this in forever, but I strongly urge you to do so. Please. Pretty please with sugar on top? I know authors get annoying with these 'urge to update' reviews, but I sincerely want to read more. So maybe...just maybe you'll take me up on my author. Your a really amazing writer and it would be a shame to leave this story unfinished.

Love
Caitlyn

great story, i'm waiting for the next chapter. continue soon

Well done and well written. Great title too. Can't wait to read the last chapter.

Waah, poor Tsuzuki! He was just trying to help Hisoka!! *sobs and hugs him* Nonetheless, lovely story, I really like your style of writing. ^_^ Please keep it up, I hope you can update again soon! ^_^

very ineteresting! can't wait to read more^^ please update soon!

Whoa! So deep... So majestic... It's amazing! XD Good work; looking forward to the next one

Really nice fic, i love it. Please write more, upadate please ^-^ I love Hisokas POV. Please more ^-^

Interesting take on Hisoka's feelings post-Kyoto, and well-written. It does feel like there should be another chapter, so I hope that will be the case!

nice fic... maintain the update... :)

This is really excellent! Please keep it going. I love the angst, you've truly captured the heart and soul of the mangas!

WOW! WHAT A GREAT BEGINNING SU! I LOVE IT! HURRY AND PLEASE UPDATE! I WANT TO READ MORE! =^*^=