Ollie's in denial... Lolz!

Cool story, I like it!

I don't know whether you have the same expression in Britain, but in the US "going commando" means something...different

I kind of LOVE how that chapter ended.
& I love him swearing in his head (in scottich broughe sexyness)

heyy. GREAT story. i absolutley love it. even if i cant spell good enough to write absolutley. uhm yeah. so.. i was just wondering..last chapter.7..in that rambling by ollie. it says saras middle name is JANE. not Danielle. ?? just wondering.
other then that
gREAT STORY!

dude, i take it back! :))

i think that rape is something very serious andtraumatic, so i find it unbelievable that she reacted so mildly to it. mildly, as in if i were raped, i'm pretty sure i'd be scarred and depressed fpr life, whether or not the man of my dreams came along immediately afterwards. other than that whole big rape thing, i'm good.

Sara Danielle?? Didn't you say that her middle name was Jane?

it was a great story, but yes. . .a bit of an abrupt ending. . .and smoehow I do not think she would get over a rape so easily. . .and I do not think that Flint wouldn't have escaped punishment. . .but a great story nonetheless. . .

good ending for a good story...I WANT MY MANDARIN ORANGE CHICKEN TO BE DONE COOKING RIGHT NOW GORRAMIT! curses...good story! i loved it, though they shoulda told McGonagall about the raping, so that Flint wouldn't have a chance to do it to anyone else, or Katie, ever again. but that's just me being logical. ignore it, it's really annoying when it happens!

Hrm... Well I just finished your story... overall, I guess I kinda liked it. I do have some constructie criticism to offer though.

One, what's up with all the rape near the end? Not that I think it's an issue to be avoided, but I didn't really feel that you captured the emotion quite right. I mean, getting raped is a BIG deal. And for all of her friends to know and not ONE of them to at least tell an adult? The first piece of advice most people give to those who have been raped or abused, regardless of being a witch or muggle, is to TELL AN ADULT. It really seemed like you blew off the intensity in that situation.

Two, the ending was kind of... iffy, at best. Well, I know you have a valid reason for it, but a little effort would've been nice. I enjoyed the beginning, so I was hoping for a little more at the end. Oh, and I would've at least preferred for all the loose ends to be tied up. Like, what happened to Sara and Nathan? To let them get away with that is really stupid.

Aw, thats sweet. They're getting married!!

Oliver's arguments with himself were hilarious!

I really enjoyed reading this!! I'm going to check out some of your other stories later, because I really should be in bed now!! lol.

Ahh ... usually I wait until the last chapter put up to review, but I had to comment on something. ... you put Muse in the story!! Yay! As if the story wasn't good enough you went on and added Muse!! I love them!!

Yep, had to have my little 'moment', but I shall continue on reading!! I'm liking the story a lot!! Can't wait to read more of it!

I do think u should have made it longer and went on. Like tell what happens after they get married and what happened to the twins and Ange' and Lic'. Did they get married( Fred and Ange and george and Lic') But, otherwise I really liked it!

I love your story!! It is fantastic!

HAHAHAHA OLIVER PROPOSED TO KATIE! YES! but poor katie...what did happen to flint?