 Kurumi-chan 2006-12-21 . chapter 2:)Awsome possum! pleaseohleaseohlease update as soon as you can, I am totally getting into this fanfic, and I want to know what happens next...> |
 Angel in disguise 2006-05-22 . chapter 2 Very good. I like the friendship between Helga and Arnold.
Update A.S.A.P if it it isn't too much to ask. :) :)
Me like this story |
 StarCrystalMoon 2006-03-11 . chapter 2woow cool story plz update soon!! |
 orange_08 2005-12-28 . chapter 2 gee..nice fic...do update soon...damn bloody blind git arnold... |
 Readrbug21 2005-12-13 . chapter 2Wow, I'm up so early this morning-really good for inspiration, but I don't think my computer really cares for 7 A.M. wake up calls...
Anywhoo, onto the real review. Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. This story is absolutely uber fantastic! (uber is my new adjective. Or is it an adverb? Oh well, that's not important) The characters are really down pat, the story is written clearly with little to no grammar mistakes (which I despise), and you have an awesome story line/plot going on. How can your story not rock?
Oh, BTW, I LOVE the preview of your next chapter. I can't wait to read it! Update when you can-you awesome writer you. lol.
Yours Truly,
Samantha
(7 A.M.?! What idiot calls off school at 7 IN THE MORNING?!?!) |
 wickedthunder02 2005-12-11 . chapter 2that was funny. please update. |
 count-lucifer 2005-12-08 . chapter 2I love this story! Your writing style is really nice - casual, yet engaging. Helga seems to have changed heaps though - hehe - she's lost her unobrow hopefully. The whole Helga/Arnold friendship is perfect and I like the way you subtley hint at a "more than friends relationship" with out making it too smushy.
keep up the good work! |
 acosta pèrez josè ramiro 2005-12-07 . chapter 2 Hey, great chapter! I really like the way you made Helga and Arnold's relationship to evolve. They really are a nice couple of friends, and it seems they are on their way to be something more.
Keep the good writing. |
 wickedthunder02 2005-12-03 . chapter 1PLEASE UPDATE |
 acosta pèrez josè ramiro 2005-12-01 . chapter 1 Nice start. Good idea about starting the story with a prologue. Just remember to conserve a little of Helga's original "lovable" personality, and the story will be fine.
Keep the good writing. |
 Chae.Rim 2005-12-01 . chapter 1That sounds good. Looking forward for the first chapter. =] |
 01angelic 2005-12-01 . chapter 1 I like it. Hope u post the chapter soon =) |