Oh. I love it! Please continue the story sometime in the future, it's just fantastic! :)

Well done.

Put more james in! everyone always ignores him... sigh. it's really good though!

What's the deal with the cat? and what happened to ursula in bulgaria? nice plot, btw.

i don't think that the story is cliched, and if it is, well, i like it. so james falls in love ? lovely.

i like how you refer to uagustus as a 'diablo'...te he.

i loved that jig about fudge...:)

eeps...how creepy can ursula get?

So james has never known love in his life...which means he'll probably fall very hard for Lily.

Lily CECILIA Evans...should I be worried?

Creepy girl, that Ursula. Whats up with the cat?

Yay! another update! How dark...what happened in Bulgaria? Ursula is so strange, what could possibly be wrong with her. Nice touch making Vernon a squib.

Laurahonest

wow, you're a really powerful writer. update soon!

hmm...ursula dearest appears to have some weird disease... i wonder...hmm..

i dont know if im right or not, but did she drink morpheus' mead? and perhaps give some to sebastian?

im not sure, since your morpheus mead is only meant to control people, not turn them into walking zombies that talks in third person.

and from a lead from the first chapter you deleted.

anyway, now were getting the full picture of what lily has to deal with, and i feel slightly more hospitable towards petunia now.

i really wonder if their mother loved flowers..

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please note the sarcasm.

keep up the good work, but dont rush! you may find you have better ideas later on.

-cherrichik

ps. cherry is fine by me,

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Ursula's freaky...I'm really intrigued. Can't wait for more, thanks for updating!

Haley