I really enjoyed this story. I can't believe it is over.

Rebel for the SHORTS!

You got to love Alanna. I love Dom!

Now I'm hungry-- I really will have to go make a sandwich!

Nice story, btw

I have come to review! Yay!

Anywho though, I've been trying to get thru all the stories you've written (and my goodness there are a few!) so you will probably be seeing lots of reviews from "A.B." or "Abnormal Dreams". Please don't get sick of me :)

I thought this was a really funny, sweet story. I really liked the idea of short-shorts although I could never see Kel actually wearing them XD I thought the banter between Neal and Dom was awesome and I really like Lalasa (sp?) in this fic.

So yeah! in condensed form.

u r awesome.

There ya be!

this was a very cute story. You took an old idea(Kel/Dom) and made it have a modern twist(shorts). In conclusion, I loved it.

Please don't put the whole song in your fic, it mostly just takes up space on the page. I read maybe the first line or two, and then scroll down to where the story starts again. Keep that in mind.

*Snorts* Baby Meatheads. We're all screwed now. Still, that's amusing 'Baby Meatheads' haha... I have an odd sense of humor. Just ignore me if you don't like it.

Just so you know, Alanna is being very OOC. Is it the heat, got to her head, or what? Thought you might want to look into it.

I liked this. It's very funny but still serious enough to cary wieght as a story rather than being a complete crac-fic. I'm looking forward to reading the sequal.

Nargil

I like the Neal bashing during your first chapter. It's funny

I read this story, and laughed. I have not laughed like that in ages. I luv it! i luv it all! THe duck pond, shorts, hotpants, the rose trellis, hahahahahha! After I read this, our teacher was giving a lecture and I remembered Lord Wyldon in hotpants and started cracking up! I got sent to detention, but it was soo worth it! Hotpants, HA! Poor Jon. (Runs off to laugh with tears in eyes)HAHA

I LOUVE YOUR STORY!1

I can definately see Alanna starting a "Shorts Revolution", not to mention Jon (trying) to forbid her from doing it. That's really funny. The whole plotline is for that matter. It's all very creative.

What? There's a sequel?! Haha, wow, I need to go read that now...

Awesome job!!

LOL! Thanks!

have i mentioned your a genius?u should be a writer!can't breathe

i about died i was laughing so hard!u r a genius!

Awesome last chapter! The other ones seem to be either all humor or all fluff, and usually if you try to combine the two there's a lot of awkwardness (no offense) but in this one you got it perfect!