its so eerie! it reminds me of... i can't remember! but one of the best dark fic writers! angel pupeeteer! i never thought i would find someone in the same league as her! hmm...maybe it's the other way around...

I love this. Part of me wants the manga to end like this. It's just ... it's ...

I love this Sakura. Still hoping, even until and AFTER the bitter end. Was that 'Amaterasu' part supposed to mean that Itachi was Sasuke's closest friend? O_o If so, that's really bizarre. Closest person, maybe, I think. Still bizarre, but makes sense in a twisted way.

Where might I find this 'Spiral Out?', if I may ask? I'll go check your profile right now, so if it's on there you don't have to worry about answering.

nice

Wow, this is a great prequel to Spiral Out. I love the story and I love reading a little more to the backstory. Great job!

Oh how cute Sakura had Saskue's child but on the other hand Yay naruto died (laughs maniaclly) thanks so much Plz make more. It was so beautifully written. Shelby_

Please, please, please update! I really want to know what happens!Sasuke is cute in the beginning, but then he becomes scary xD And poor Naruto :'(

nice fanfic. Just like Sasuke... REALLY GREAT FANFIC!

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I love it!

good story

A bit sad at the end, but I loved it.

Ooh. Very nice; I liked it. Love the Kakashi you portray. E, I

"the only person he'd practiced on was Naruto"? And "she hoped Naruto was the only person he'd practiced on"? O_O That's disturbing...

And I still hope Spiral Out has a happy SasuSaku ending... even though it's not likely. ;_;

I have fallen in love with your Sakura. She is brillant, jaded, and still the same little girl so enraptured with her boys that not even betrayal, death, and decades can completely pull them out of her marrow.