Were's the next chapter?

Wow. I like this.

Even though I have no Idea what Alchemy thingy thing is I like this story very much.

so when the next update man

Good story, overall

However, protege does not mean prodigy.

WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!

nice...very cool story i really liked this one also i dont think i seen a cross over like this one keep up the good work dude

When are you going to update?! This is pretty good so far!

you are a very good writer andyour storys are grate but can you update a few of them soon PLZ

ttfn

Very good, mate. When ya gonna update?

keep on typing and ill keep on reading

I'm not normally a huge fan of crossovers, but this was a intersting mix so I though I'd check it out. I thought it to be pretty humerous and I've enjoyed what I've read.

The "scene" thing bugged my until I realized what it was you were doing.

I do have a couple of critiques, however.
First, on the author notes, please don't put them into the story like that especially those of a commentary nature. If you wish to have such commentary do it at the end. By adding those notes, it takes me out of the story which is frustrating. You detract from the quality of your story when you place author notes like that.

Second, on the dates. I'd suggest picking a time framework. Rather that just saying whatever is reasonable with yourself. I believe the Ranma series has a specific time framework already, but if you can't find one, just pick something. As long as you let the readers know you have done this and are consistent with yourself then it will be okay. As you have it now, it comes across as an unnecessary author's note and makes you look lazy.

But, as I said, I did enjoy your story so far and will read more if you decide to continue it. Nabiki seems a little OOC, but given what happened I expect that and as long as you cover what happened in the FMA world then its no big deal.

Finally, your grammar and spelling are good. I noticed a couple of typos, but there were only a few and other than that everything was okay.

Nice crossover between FMA and Ranma. I couldn't tell from the summary that it was though. I hope you're going to continue this fic, it's quite enjoyable.

Please write more of this, I like it so far.

Awsome hope to see more of this story some time soon ^_^