i like it; it was kinda cute yet depressing anyways my point being you should write a story it would be really good i know i would read it!!

very nicely done, cute!

^^, nice.

I wouldn't venture so far just to say that this is a dark fic, but there is angst in it. I like the flow of the fic...it was nice, and very easy to understand. Lucy/Nyu and Kouta forever! ^^

I think you pulled off a Dark/Fluff fic well actually. :)
Well done!