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That was so sweet!

Teehee, I love their messages...

Your writing is good and pleasant too by the way.

Dear Sendoh Akira,

Remember me? Hey.. Don’t ignore me like that. I’m your guardian angel. Be good and reply me ok? I have to take care of you, remember? I don’t want to be kicked out. Woah! Calm down. I’m just trying to do what I’m supposed to do as your angel ok? Sorry. I’m not suppose to expose my identity remember? It’s the rule. Lemme give you a hint. We used to hang out together. Why are you so tee-ed off? I mean you DO sound a little pissed. Mind sharing your problem? We’re teammates and I’m your angel. I’m supposed to care. Come on. Spill the beans.

Your Guardian Angel.

-Damn! This part made me laugh so hard! XD I really love your fics!

i defenitely like this!

I love it...(_)

kawaii! demo, no offense meant pero this fic kinda reminds me of the GAMOT? slash COMMERCIAL? _ "Gardan Angel" lol.

pls, pls, dont be mad...really it just happened to hav crossed our pathetic nutshells pero, no offense meant talaga, we love your story! mwah!

of course, senru rox! :)

cheers:)

*hail* nice fic...! more! more! more! haha...i really liked it, at first it made me wonder what kind of game the team would play and Rukawa's first letter made me laugh...Sendoh reading the exact words he just said to Rukawa...nice one!

hey! i definitely love your fic! especially the part where our very dear Aki... guided Ru ru in shooting the ball! its so so so sweet... but then... is there no part two? ok ok never mind... Just write another senru fic ok? and i'm glad you love senru! cause i love them very much much much! hehehe

I thought it was pretty dumb of kaede (lookie, we’re on first name basis *snickers*) to just copy out the text messages like that. But the concept was pretty funny—though somewhat unlikely.

Then again, he did say he was sleepy, so that should answer for this bit of ooc-ness i guess. And he’s at the university, too, so things may have changed—i think. xp

It was fun reading through this, though, despite kaede acting strangely at some points—at most points, actually . And I really like it, despite whatever technical discrepancy it may have (it has but a few, so there’s no need to panic _). My criterion for a good fic is not so much on technicalities, anyway (although, i do comment on that once in a while—heck, it’s my own problem, too!), but more on the emotions that a certain fic manages to stir within me. And I’d say this one really hit a sensitive spot in my heart. Nice.

Then, of course, it is SenRu. And we all know that anything with SenRu in it is heaven.

It is good to know you are serious about becoming a better writer. I will surely be watching you grow, so do write more all right! And please do try to keep our boys in-character next time. _

Ps: this may be just a personal preference; i know it’s pretty normal for us girls to riddle our sms’s with expressions like *gasp* and *blush*, but it really seems a little off on kaede... or akira, even. I suggest you drop these indicators and just let the text messages speak for themselves.

And this kinda reminds me of that other fic which i also really like “Last Minute Access” by mirai. That one’s pretty cute, too!

ah! glad that i checked ffnet! _kawaii! i luv this! i luv this! this is totally new for me! kawaii! really awesome! senru is really d best! :)

Wah! I love this the most! It's really really good!

Wah. The fic is so nice and cute and and and AND- WAH! The fic is so lovely. Waah. I love it. Keep SenRu rockin'! Good Job. XD

I love Sendoh and Rukawa and this fic is the absolute epitome of sheer SenRu goodness! Thanks for writing this wonderful fic for us. :)

nice story... I like the plot... tho there are Rukawa OOCness shown... I know it's hard to keep his personality... I just didn't expect him to cry... hehehe but all in all... very good...

SO0O0OO CUTE! Hahaha... I liked it, it was really cute, cute, cute, cute. Though Rukawa... just copying the messages... Hahahaha a bit... dense? LOL I liked your story, it's so cute and sweet. Sure Rukawa cried and yeah all that stuff... But still I liked it... THIS BETTER GET MORE REVIEWS! Coz this is really cute

- Mimay

it was hilariously cute, dear! so in luv with the pairing! thnx for this senru story!

i luv this guardian angel thing...*sigh* i can only imagine rukawa red across the face when he found out...

just write more, okies?