Reviews for The Guardian in Spite of Herself

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The Unicorn 2008-09-24 ch 1,	abuseHaving Uchiah Sassuke living with Yukiko, across the hall from Naruto is ridiculous and impossible for many different reasons including but not limited to: -Unlike Naruto there'd be people competing for the privilege of housing Sassuke (for political reasons at the very least, although probably other reasons as well) -The same people who'd have raised a fuss if the Hokage took care of Naruto would raise at least as much of a fuss if the Hokage has Sassuke living in close proximity to Naruto. -Sassuke has several houses he could live in and the money to pay for a house keeper even without any money from some orphan's fund and that is probably what he'd wish to do. The Unicorn
Wedge 2008-07-27 ch 12, anon.	abuseAWESOMENESS. UPDATE PLZ KTHXBYE
GoldenRat 2008-07-14 ch 12,	abuseYay, sequel. Aftermath of Uchiha Massacre makes for interesting read. I look forward to reading about a Sasuke who isn't left alone, but's still an angsty teenager.
Liviania 2008-07-11 ch 12,	abuseI'm sad this story isn't high on the to be finished list. Several people recommended this series highly, and I agree with their judgement. It's an interesting twist, with well done OCs, and a plausible plot. (Who hasn't wondered about the Uchihas on missions?) Livi
WalkingDisasters 2008-07-09 ch 12,	abuseThere's really not much to critize here, because it all seems so good - I'm captivated, definitely. I do like how you've written this - it's all like an intricate web with all the details and people - it just works out so well! Although, you tend to go, "Naruto's sister" a lot... But still, it's a pretty good story. Are you going to write a book anytime soon? :)
Haruka-Hime 2008-06-07 ch 12,	abuseCan you tell me where you got your names from?
sophia666 2008-05-05 ch 12,	abuseWow... I guess Sasuke's decided to go missing-nin a lot earlier than in canon. Great chapter. Please update really soon.
sophia666 2008-05-05 ch 11,	abuseGreat chapter. I really do like Ginji and Eiji, as well as Tetsuko and Mitsu-chan, and I understand Ginji's reasoning, as well as Eiji's ideas. And the fact that he remembers 'humans were tools of their clans and villages, but not only tools; humans had minds and hearts and souls as well, and nobody should ever pretend otherwise'. I think that's really important. Kakashi, Naga and Kafunnokaze are funny, I hope Naga doesn't die if they find Itachi. Will Naruto and Sasuke really stay behind or go along with the caravan? Please update soon.
anony 2008-05-02 ch 12, anon.	abuseWow, this is really great! I am totally in love with these characters, even your original ones. I think it's really interesting how Sasuke thinks about Yukiko--he calls Itachi "that man" and for a while he was calling her "the woman," although now it looks like she's graduated to "Naruto's sister." I guess even Sasuke in the depths of shock can't quite block Naruto into being just another obstacle...
Ashcat 2008-04-25 ch 12,	abuseIt was nice to see our main characters taking the lead again here. I'd missed Yukiko :) and I like Seichi as a character his quirks are interesting and are plausible. I also like how you're using Kurenai so far in this story. Sasuke is an interesting addition to the mix but I think you're characterized him well. Naruto and his interplay feels authentic and I still feel bad for naruto here in the story he is still a kid :) I find the idea behind the whole guy who will be assasinated interesting and why he's doing it but I think you had let him run away witht he story a bit in the previous chapters so it was nice to get a break. We don't have to know all the details about that story and if you're that into it maybe it should become a side story about the background reasons etc. My critical comment is that you way overused "naruto's sister" as a tag for Yukiko in the last few paragraphs with Sasuke. I really like how you've created the politics and infrastructure and world building into this - your work as an orig fic writer shows through but the subtly you normally use with it makes it nice and not distracting.
Inarae 2008-04-06 ch 12,	abuseHeh, I didn't know there was a sequal to Apartment Manager. What a nice way to end the weekend. It is wonderful, naturally, so thank you very much for writing and sharing. I was caught up in the story enough that I didn't pay attention to the writing, but I'll go back and reread it in a few days so I can give you a more analytic review. Have a good week, and thanks again!
White Blossoms 2008-03-31 ch 12,	abuseHey it was a great chapter sorry it took me such a long time to reveiw!! I just never seemed to be able to read and if I did I didnt get the chance to review!! But this chapter was great! I wonder what this realisation will do to Sasuke? Lol Seichi and Yukiko are a funny pair together their intteration is very interesting to read! In the sense of them together and around other people! I hope Naruto bounces back lol! Great chapter! White Blossoms
feelingwhimsy 2008-03-25 ch 12, anon.	abuseFor some reason, I am ridiculously pleased that Akaro might be alive. xD; Ah, random attatchment to background characters. In other news, very interested to see what Sasuke's thinking in not wanting to go back, etc,etc. I'll be keeping an eye on this. :]
RoxasIsReal13 2008-03-01 ch 12,	abuseEagerly awaiting an update.
hakuisagirl 2008-02-22 ch 12,	abusei loved the whole thing. the first story and this one. only complaint...i need more.

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