*grumbles* stupid review throttle...:(

Well anyway I like it!! It really adds a bit more of a personal touch to Naomi and gives us a bit more development for her character, which will be helpful in your future stories...the summaries of which you SHOULD post, cuz I never remember to look at them when I'm home and I don't have them here at school. :P Silly me. Anyway good luck with getting *and keeping* ahead with chapters, I think you can do it this time!!

:O Could it be? Is it ACTUALLY an update?! IT IS! I didn't see THAT one coming a week or two ago...*coughcough* :) haha, anyway YAY! I love the ending! Not the fact that it IS ending, but the ending in general...the fight between Naomi and Melantha was probably my favorite part of the whole story, lol. Just too much fun to picture that...And I love the Sam/Tucker talk at the beginning, it really sets a lot up for the later stories, which I'm also super excited for. And Vlad's still a jerk. :O I'll be looking for TT in my inbox soon!

Huh, I never reviewed this chapter. O_o Whoops.

Anyways, the whole if you're lonely get a cat thing never gets old. XD And it's so like Danny to poke fun at his enemies, even if they have the upper hand. I really like how you captured that aspect of his personality. But aw...Naomi hurt Tucker's feelings. D= But anyways, heehee, Vlad getting blackmailed to follow the plan, that's nice.

The very last chapter...I'm sorta sad to see it go, but I'll be on the lookout for the sequel! =D

The epilogue was really cute, it's a nice wrap-up for the story. ^_^ I still feel so sad for Tucker...TToTT Poor guy. But it's cute how she's noticing Danny's nervousness around her. XD

And yay, I'm an honorable mention! =D I'm glad I could help. ^_^

Wow. So this is pretty much the end...except for the epilogue, of course. =D I really liked how mature Tucker was being in this chapter, giving such good advice and all that. I feel really bad for him though...and Sam. ;-; I'm glad that Layla stood up against Melantha though. ^_^

But anyways, loved this chapter, and I'm really glad you got around to updating it. ^_^

And as for all my neglected stories...>_< I'm really sorry about that, it's just my Junior year of highschool getting to me. And I'm trying to co-author a book with my friend, which we're gonna try to get published. =D I've just been pretty busy. But I really do want to at least finish all the stories I've started, if nothing else. XD I'll make time. It's probably just gonna take a while.

Okay, this is something my friend did for one of my stories, and I thought it would be good to do for you.

This is a top ten list of things I loved from your story.

10. Even though I hate him, you put Vlad Masters into the story. You captured him perfectly, and made him seem almost real to me.

9. Naomi... what can I say about her other than she is a wonderful character. You created something so original, it left me speechless... and a tad jealous.

8. Um... Necron, Skulker, Technus, Desiree... enough said? I think not. You brought so many of Danny's enemies into the story, which made me jump for joy.

7. One word... EMBER! She was my favorite villain. And that new power you gave her was ROCKIN'!

6. Sam is by far my favorite character, and you captured her perfectly. The fact that she can't make up her mind about people, and half the time she hates Danny, half the time loves him... I don't know, you just seemed to make it more clear to me. It was amazing.

5. Oh... the Fenton's. Can't forget the Fenton's. Jack is wonderful, as always, just because he is so damn ignorant to the fact that his 'best friend' Vlad is A) in "love" with Maddie, and B) completely and utterly evil. Jazz is wonderfully intellectual, as she should be. And Maddie, well... just BRAVA!

4. When Naomi freaked out on Vlad... PRICELESS. That was wonderfully portrayed, and I couldn't think of anything you could've done to make it better.

3. Tucker's reaction to Danny and Naomi having feelings for each other. It was perfect... totally in character. I don't think I could have captured him that way. Well done, my dear.

2. Well... the mother/daughter moment between Patty and Naomi almost brought tears to my eyes... don't ask me why... it just did.

1. Naomi... half ghost... holy crap! It was unbelievable! And the fact that she isn't like Danny or Vlad in being a half ghost just amazed me... I cannot wait to find out who her father is.

Like I've probably told you before, I suck at reviewing... this was the best way I could think of to tell you what I thought in a constructive way.

Let me dumb it down a bit for my own sake.

"Lyk, omg! It was 2 good! Update soon, k? K thx by!"

Amanda Ruth

I love this story. It was very well written, though I do think you could do with some minor adjustments (too instead of to... adding a 'd' at the end of 'an', small things like that.).

Your story telling is impeccable, and I can't (well, I CAN) wait for the end of this story. I just know you'll end it well.

Good luck with your series of stories after this one!

Amanda Ruth

Oh my gosh, I did NOT see that coming! O_O oh goodness, poor Danny, losing his eyesight! How in the world are you going to fix this? I must say I did like when you called Vlad Chuckles--that is hilarious!! And Melantha's army is going to be really hard to beat. I can't believe there's only the last chapter and the epilogue left--where has time gone? Anyway good luck finishing, and I hope you get more reviews!

~Nikki

AH UPDATE *DIES* 8DD YAY! I nearly forgot about this! I remember it the alert coming in mah email, and me freaking out.. then I had to do my stupid homework.. so yeah. XD; So that's who Melantha ish.. O_O I'M REVIEWING! DON'T KILL ME MELANTHA-SAMA!! *cowers* This was a loverly surprise after exams, anyways. XD Wow.. evil lady with humungo ginormous army, Tucker attempting to be cool, Vlad and Naomi exchanging insults (YAY WITTY BANTER), and just plain DANNY all in one! 83 'Melantha looks like Naomi.. wonder why...' hm... o.o le gasp. UPDATE. NOW.. I'll update too, but YOU HAVE TO UPDATE FIRST... XD;; Okays, my mom is playing the Jeopardy tune on me, and that means I have to go now. CX UPDATE! KEEP UP TEH GOOD WORK! (sorry for rambling =P)

I can't wait for #7! :D Hehe, Way too much fun this series is. Like Yoda I am talking. Hmm...Anyway WOOT!! I LOVE IT! Especially Melantha; she's got so many issues, but she's great. I can really picture her in my head, and you had Danny so in character the whole time!! And Chuckles...too wonderful. That'd be odd if Melantha and Vlad ended up together, they DO both need cats. :D

I just found your story, its nicely original. I'm glad you've given a history for Melantha. I'm a bit of a torture fan, so i'm kind of sad that Danny got away so easily, although, he isn't completly free yet... I also like your character Naomi, she has great interactions with Sam and Tucker, although sometimes Sam seems a little OOC. I hope these comments were helpful and keep up the good work.

OOH! It's letting me review now! So here's a hugely enormous grin for ya: I LOVE IT!! :D Hah, you have to be insane to write such a great chapter. ;) Keep up the great work!

Whoo, Danny's got mad! Strong language for him, but I know how that feels. Great chappy, I'm excited for the next! Don't writing!! :)

About Layla and Namine, Namine is in the second KH game and she is a witch and the way you described Layla sounded JUST like Namine and totally just surprised me! Now about this chappy, WHOO! What a twist!

Interesting...Layla sounds like Namine from Kingdom Hearts...in fact, almost EXACTLY like her. That I liked though. Nice little twist you put in there!