the kindergarden theme is cute, but you might check the spelling of some words, sorry, but your story is so cute, especially when you wrote Artemis going to a karate class. I can just imagine it!

This was a very good story. Really good.

Uh-oh. Mulch is a TEACHER?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? Good story.

That was awesome. From Artemis to Holly to Mulch. How a six year old prodigy takes control. Awesome fic.

Wow. That was so in character for Artemis that Colfer himself couldn't have done much better. Not that I would know but hey, it's really good!

Interesting story.

Man you write good! Not too surprisingly all my fav ARt Fowl fan fics are writen by you! and that's really cool cause i'm really hard to please when it comes to fan fics. Keep it up:)

Man you write good! Not too surprisingly all my fav ARt Fowl fan fics are writen by you! and that's really cool cause i'm really hard to please when it comes to fan fics. Keep it up:)

Hello Books,

Great story!

Still an excellent story. You some spelling and punctuation errors (nothing blaring, but too many to go into detail about) that you need to fix, but you seem to have handled this story quite nicely. Why does a young Artemis know about fairies? You haven't quite developed that properly. Perhaps he took somebody's stories far too literally. He IS five years old, after all.

At the beginning of this chapter, when you said "in other words" you might want to try something more like "namely," or something along those lines. Just read over it and if you think it sounds right, all I said is null and void^-^ But other than that (o, and I wish your chapters were longer- but that'll just make me want to read it more) it was one heck of a story! I love stories about Ary as a kid I-D

Keep writing!
~Bottled Sunshine

thats hilarious, write more quickily

so short! but thats ok, so long as you update soon!
cnt wait 4 more!

this is your first fic? its so good! :)
5 yrs old! muahaha! that sounds great!
i agree with angeline, there is NO figuring out males! he was writing himself a present? lol
well, onto the next chapter...