Update please I luv it!

Well, I'm not a big fan of angst, but this is story is great. I'm anxious to find out what happens next. Good luck.

It's so sad. I literally was dieing with sadness. And they killed the bad guy...but they can't be a happy family and live happily ever after. I hope something worls out for them. To make things worse, I was watching Winter Cicada...episodes 2 and 3! I hope things look up soon.

its not often that I cry in a story but this one i bawled

this was so sad but so good. cant wait for the next chapter

Oh that was so sad that I almost cried. Update soon.

That was so sad, but I really loved it. Its so nice, its so sad how the child and her parents parted from each other. I cant wait until the next chapter. Please upadte soon. :))

Go~d, that's so depressing. I don't think people should be able to take children away unless thet have a good reason... that's just cruel. :( So sad... but do keep updating; stories like these make mah world go 'round... sorry, that was a horrible attempt at humor. But do keep up the great work!

OMG! I loved it! You made me cry too but it was so good! Please update soon!

wow they took their daughter away Hiei and Kurama are really upset add more now now and hurry thanks

I hurt -- for both of our demons but more so for Hiei because I know (as a mother) what he must be feeling right now at the loss of his daughter... emotions which you expressed so very eloquently and poignantly in this chapter.

You have me traumatized...

How dare that old hag (who, due to Oki's nose, smells bad) still go on with this. Did she not hear or see the things happening in the room?!

Forgive me for saying this, but I will resort to hate you and that lady until you update and return Ember to her respective parents, Hiei and Kurama.

I'm not reviewing again until you give Oki back to her parents.

What the heck?! Hiei and Kurama shouldnt be separated from their daughter! Its all a misunderstanding! *cries* its too sad...Its a good chapter, but its so sad. PLEASE UPDATE SOON...PLEASE!

I see what you mean by "it's going to get worse after this". That... really sucks. They finally get her free for the bestard and NOW she's going to be taken away... Poor kid, poor Kurama and Hiei, too. Update as soon as you can, I really want to find out how Oki takes the news!