very good story...i liked it alot..you should put another chapter up tho..like about someone else (like one of the kids) finds the room and starts using it and luce finds out...that would be cool.lol keep up the good work

I love it!:) Very adorable!:)

Great Job

I find you story a litte hard to belive. But it was fun to read. My friend "Molly" () Told me I had to read it so I ddid. And I am glad I did.

I personaly loved your story!I thought that you had a great plot.I love 7th Heaven so I randomly selected to read your story...and normaly I hate to read and I never read something unless it sounds good!I got so tied up into reading your story that I totally blocked everything else out.All in all I thought that it was a great story,and would love to hear more of your stories in the future!

a but unrealistic but good!

wow you must be a huge 7th heaven fan! well i am too! awesome story

cool!

Hi, my name is Sloane. I just wanna tell you that..its a nice story plot, but the grammar is terrible and you spell Camden wrong. Maybe with some editing, the story would be more enjoyable.

That was a good plot line but what was the point? Nothing really happened.

Honestly I think it's kinda full house like and well possibly unrealistic. But it was well written.\

i like your storie!keep it up

i thought you did very well no offense but it was too long

Lots of spelling mistakes- but the idea is cute!

good