aw! so cute! al was kinda mean to ed at times and it made me cry a bit but it ended very well. i luv it!

So cute!
chu~

Little goofs.

Aw... ^3^ It was squishy and cute! I loved the omake. :D

You actually did make me cry at the end, like literally tears short-circuting my keyboard XD If you ever hear/download the song Lullabye for a stormy night by Vienna Teng, and then read the last of this story. You`ll cry too. try it ;)

woh! what a cute fic^^ my english isn´t that incredibly good, too but i didn´t see any major mistakes^^
ed was so sweet *lol*
i think there really was enough winry (i don´t like her-__-), so this is even making me more happy. the last part was meean *rofl*
good job done *proud*
horo-chan

This has to be one of the best fics i've ever read! It's just soo adorable!

That was very kawii...I loved it

CUTENESS!
don't write the authors note in another language!!

This story made me shout out a long no at one point.

OMG, that was SO awesome!! ^^ The story almost made me cry, but it made me laugh as well. Good job! ^^

XD I loved it! ^_^

~Chibi-chan~

so, let me get this straight, when al and ed went back to their normal bodies, ed accidentally messed up and ended up pregnant, but he's still a guy? tell me if i'm wrong. and that was mean of al to do that to ed on the omake, it was halarious though. lol! I liked it, the grammer is ok, but it still needs a little work, That was really good!

Aw! Greatness!
GM

wow...awesome! you did really well on this!