That was pretty cool. I've had a hard time writing about Raven cuz of her past. I'm also a Christian (duh) so Raven kinda made it hard for me to write about her. But you've given me some ideas on how to do her story. Thakns and PrOpZ.

This is God's day,

Mandigirl

Please don't mistake this for a flame.

You do need a lot more detail in your stories. Also, spell check should be your -best friend ever-. Grammar needs some work, but you have some good potential ideas.

I admire your originality, but most Fanficers don't take kindly to purely RavenxOC characters.

Keep working on it! I'm sure you'll be great someday.

It was okay, Might I suggest putting a little detail in your stories next time. I had a tough time trying to imagine the story.