M? Interesting, i quite liked it!

That was beautiful. I love the idea that they aren't actually brothers - nice little loophole for them to be together. Good thinking! :)

How can I review this without sounding like a rabid lunatic? Okay, I'll just say it: GREAT! FANTASTIC! For such a short story, it really sinks its hooks in. I loved the pining tone of the first couple of chapters, and the twist in the third was totally unexpected and so cool! I hugely admire anyone who can write short pieces and make them as good as a long story (often better). I hope you do write a kind of sequel to this, because I would love to see where Sam and Dean go from here.

Wow. I really liked this. I wish you would have made it longer. I like the twist of Sam and Dean not being brothers. Okay, here is a technical question because I suck at computers and stuff. How did you get the neat little boxes to separate each person's thoughts.

more? please

Nice beginning. Waiting patiently (okay impatiently) for the next part.

Aw, very fluffy, but sweet. Nice touch at the end with Sam and Dean *not* being brothers. Cute.

Very interesting. Would love to read more.

um .. just a small idea .. you might want to put a slash warning on your story ...

This story should have a higher rating and a slash warning. Kids read this stuff.

more... this is gonna be good..