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Darth Ben Valor
2008-06-17 . chapter 31
All right! That was a great sequel, dude! 8D

Nice work! You rule, your story rules! Everything about ya rules! ;D
Orange Sora
2008-06-17 . chapter 31
Wow! That was the greatest story ever!

I'm glad that you done it! Congratulations!

And, thanks for giving me the rights to do ACFF3! I don't have much of a plot yet, but I'll think of something!

Anyway, congratulations!
AquaFlameElementalist
2008-06-16 . chapter 31
Great ending! The song at the end was a nice touch.

Congrats on finishing the fic! :D
Neros Urameshi
2008-06-16 . chapter 31
AWESOME!.!.!.! I love this ending! You did great!

Li Showron: (unenthusiastically, feeling sad and a little heartbroken) Yeah... great...

(Li began walking away in sadness.)

Cream: What's wrong, Li?

Shadow: Oh, man... he's in love with Lilo, and she ended up with Linus in the end.

Me: Sorry to say to Orange Sora, but... I just don't think Linus and Lilo would make a good couple.

Lilo: Yeah. Somehow, I... kinda don't like what I got from Linus. (spits a bit) Hey, Li! (starts running after Li) Wait!

Li: (stops walking, turns to see Lilo)

Lilo: Li, even though I kissed Linus, I still love you, no matter what.

Li: (smiles warmly) Thanks, Lilo.

(With that, Li and Lilo began kissing each other passionately.)

Ash: (smirks) Now THERE'S a true love for Lilo!

Me: Yeah, anyway... 1, 2, 3!

Everyone: CONGRATULATIONS!.!.!.!.!
AquaFlameElementalist
2008-05-09 . chapter 30
Great chapter!

I liked the author's appearances, but I have one thing to say about that: Um...You do know J.K Rowling is a girl, right? I don't mean that as a flame, I'm just pointing that out.

Please update.
Neros Urameshi
2008-05-08 . chapter 30
The final battle is about to commence! This is gonna be awesome!

Please continue! One last time!
Dr.Dude
2008-05-08 . chapter 30
Is it really nescessary for Pete the Barncat to be the main bad guy of all this? I mean what, Sin IS the actual Final Boss of Final Fantasy X, so shouldn't Sin himself be the one controlling the strings of the whole operation? You could also pull a Super Paper Mario and have one of the lackies working with Pete end up releasing Sin and control his power. But it's your story and this is my opinion.
Orange Sora
2008-05-08 . chapter 30
The final battle is against Linus, Lilo, and Pete, huh? This is going real good!

Heh, somehow, I kinda knew that Little Alfred would be the prince of darkness in Hank's dimension.

(pause, then...) HA HA HA! Free-will? Pete, you should have gone with Hank in the first place! Hank is so dumb, he wouldn't know what hit him.

(winces) Even though Danglars and Tybalt are possessed, I feel sorry that they are being thrown around. Ouch.

Say, are you going to include that little side story of Danglars and Tybalt I put in the bonus chapter of POHBT: A ACFF Mini-Story in your last chapter? Because I really want to see that part. Just go to the bonus chapter of POHBT: A ACFF Mini-Story, and copy and paste into your chapter.

And, thanks for thanking me for in your story. And thanks for making ACFF 1 and ACFF 2!

BTW, would you mind if I did ACFF3? I'll try to make it fantisical as your past ones, but I don't know how long.

Well, please continue! Just right after your break, of course!
Darth Ben Valor
2008-05-08 . chapter 30
Whoa! Looks like the big battle is coming up!

I so cannot wait! Please continue!
Orange Sora
2008-03-19 . chapter 29
(No one was at the computer. Everyone staying was confused.)

Flame: Where's Orange Sora?

Danglars: In a bad mood.

Flame: Why?

Tybalt: THe site won't let him upload his documents. So, right now, he's currently sulking in the corner.

Flame: Oh.

Tybalt: BUt that doesn't mean, he's not in the mood for friends.

Flame: How's that?

Danglars: Well, first, he checks this to see if it is updated, or that mini-series that Tinyrocket is going to begin.

Flame: Maybe he's having the series at DeviantArt?

Tybalt: Maybe. BUt for now, we'll have to wait.

Flame: YEah. (Turns, and yells at computer screen.) COME ON ALREADY! UPDATE!

Tybalt: FLame, please!

Flame: Sorry.

Danglars: LEt TR take some time. Meanwhile, why don't we cheer up our friend.

Flame: Okay.

Well, hope this gets updated soon!
Orange Sora
2008-02-24 . chapter 29
Any chance you could update this... soon?
Orange Sora
2007-12-27 . chapter 29
Just rereading this chapter again. I think my favorite part is Pete calling Great Pumpkin G.P., and Great Pumpkin was confused by this term. Boy, little would G.P. know that that name would stick to the bad guys and good guys.

Anyway, update ACFF2: SR soon!
Dr.Dude
2007-11-21 . chapter 29
This is getting better by the minute! Sorry for not reviewing the other chapters Tiny. By the way, do you mind if I can make some requests for this story?
SSBFreak
2007-11-18 . chapter 29
Sweet! You included the characters I suggested!

After reading your fic, I've sorta become inspired to start my own 'Massive RPG'-type fic. Maybe I'll get started on it once I finish one of the three fics I've got going right now (Megamix Tournament, Amazing Race and Kingdom Hearts: Next).

Please continue!
Orange Sora
2007-11-14 . chapter 28
(switches to me) HANK!

(switches to Hank) What?

(switches to me) Stop messin with the buttons! I didn't end this review yet!

(switches to Hank) Sorry.

(switches to me) Good. Back to my review.

Glad you finally have Danglars and Tybalt in there. Now, I wonder... are they REALLY possessed, or just pretending to?

Anyway, please continue! Now I end my review with a MST3k scene! (Find it on YouTube. It's called 'Invasion of the Neptune Men', or maybe 'Kabuki Theater'.

Tom: Hello and...

Crow and Tom: Konichiwa.

Tom: Tonight we present a traditional Japanese Kabuki play. Translated to English, this ancient work is entitled, "Neil Simon's The Sunshine Boys."

Crow: Now, how many of you are familiar with Japanese theater? Anyone wanna…

Tom: Anybody at all.

Crow: ...field this one? Err uh... (Mike raises hand. Crow looks at Mike) Ah, yes sir! And do you enjoy Kabuki Theater?

Mike: Ah, actually I prefer Noh Theater.

Tom: Well, then why did you raise your hand?

Mike: Because I like Noh theater. Noh plays are my favorite.

Tom: So you don't like any theater at all?

Mike (chuckles) No, let me explain. Noh Theater is classic Japanese drama. Noh plays have been produced since the 13th century and Noh actors are revered, even today.

Crow: But why are you dissing Japanese theater? What's your deal man?

Mike: No, no wait a minute. Noh Theater started in Japan.

Tom: Ah, so now you tell us Japan doesn't have any theater whatsoever.

Mike: They have lots of theater including Noh Theater.

Crow: So they have lots of theater and they have no theater.

Mike: Exactly.

Tom: What?

Crow: No theater?

Mike: Yes.

Crow and Tom: What?!

Mike: Noh Theater. N-O-H.

Tom: N-O-H huh?

Crow: Geez.

Tom: Well, there you just gone and shown what an idiot you are!

Crow: Well, hey, I'll handle this Tom, calm down. Mike, I'm going to ask you a series of simple questions which even a cretin like you could answer yes or no. Now, is there a theater in Japan?

Mike: Yes.

Crow: Good! And do you have a particular favorite type of Japanese theater?

Mike: Yes.

Crow: Well good now we're gettin' somewhere. Mike, will you tell me the name of your favorite form of Japanese theater?

Mike: Noh.

Crow: Why not?

Mike: Why not what?

Crow: Why won't you tell me your favorite Japanese theater?!

Mike: I just did!

Crow: Did what?!

Mike (exasperated) Told you my favorite form of Japanese theater.

Crow: You did?

Mike: Yes.

Crow (angry) Well will you tell me again?

Mike: Yes: Noh.

Tom: Oh, come on!

Crow: Mike, I'm gonna grab a stepladder so you can jump up my butt!

Tom: May we do our little Kabuki play now?

Crow: (Breathes "yeah")

Mike: Go ahead, but remember- I like Noh Theater more than I like Kabuki Theater.

Crow: I thought you didn't like Kabuki!

Mike: I don't!

Crow and Tom (crying) Ah!

Crow: Oh god! (Crow and Servo become apoplectic)

Mike (to Cambot) You gotta mess with them every now and then. We'll be right back.

Gypsy (who has been watching the whole thing, quietly) I get it Mike.
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