Fuuny more please .

holy shit this doesnt make any sense!HELLO I AM MASTER CHIEF

well i love your story please add more

Simply hilarious, much better than other fics with the same idea of an elite raising a human. By the way I stand with you with people always bugging you and reporting your fics. (my order 66 fic was reported by someone).

Anyway, keep these oneshots alive

A few things I have to say about this

1. 'GET YOUR FUCKING ASS BACK HERE YOU FUCKING HERETIC!' Hi-larious.

2. WHY did he save the kid?

3. WHY did they (and don't ask me who I mean by 'they') let him keep the kid?

4. Fifteen is old enough to drive a ghost? Or he's driving without a license? Or he was already one year old when Kozo'Jumenee found him? ?

5. I realize it's pretty dumb to expect it to make sense when it's written by someone named "Stupidfic"

LOL! let me guess, that's you? heh, I have a covi bro if it helps, but our relationship isn't that... er... friendly.

O man this sucks, by the way there is already one fic with the same idea, but not a parody, i also read it and it sucked, but not as much as this one

... ... ... The beginning was okay till the very end where you got lazy. :/ Don't write any more of this garbage please I'm begging you!

Silver: That was mean. o.o

Shut up. -.-; I meant what I said.

This story is going places!

Phantom; What's that mean?

Me; It means it's good. IT's an earth term you Covenant Elites wouldnt

Phantom; I have been on Earth for 3 years and I STILL dont understand humans...

Me; You need a CENTURY for that! I'm part human, and even I dont understand them...lol

you're right, i didn't see that coming. an elite raising a human child. very funny. update soon

the beginning was good...but the rest of the story was crap... :/

Not bad, but... ever since Pinkuh started that "Twisted Origins" fic on her Deviantart space, we have all seen the explosion in popularity of this sort of fic, tarnishing what was originally a quite interesting idea.

What is that idea, you might ask? I'll put it quite simply: Covenant parent adopts Human child, despite it being quite implausible.

Time to think of something new, people. Really.

Actualy I did see that coming... from about two or three miles away.

that was good, extreamly funny( you were high when you wrote this weren't you)but still good, some grammer mistakes though( like i could do better ("lol"))

please continue