update or else!

There are so many things that are wrong with this story. The most important one is that...you posted it on the wrong site. This has nothing to do with A Great and Terrible Beauty! Post it on the site for original stories. Maybe this story will amount to something on that site.

There are some people who simply should never, ever, EVER write stories, because they are so painfully bad. You are obviously one of them.

i loved this honey, mhm, i did i did. i just ate it up :)

write more please

-misses kitten

mo hog? wth? you mean mohawk? other than that really descriptive. I like. keep it up.