sorry to bother you...Just here because I want to put your fic in my favorite. Oh! One thing: can you do more Christopher/David fic? You do that very well! (and I really love the way you write) hem, sorry for my bad english, I'm belgian and just good at read english, not write (I'm really sad, in fact, to not be able to)

This is goin' on my favorites list. It's too bad I didn't find the story while it was still in the works, I would have enjoyed answering the choice questions. It really was a sweet, sad, romantic kind of story. For this I thank you. K, bye. _

DAVID EVERWORLD!

#blinks# Doink. That was good. That was very good. I would say ways to describe its goodness but I have no idea where my Theasaurus is. So... Good. Good. Good. I wanted more C/D slash. Good. Good. Good...

DUDE.

You are the QUEEN of D/C slashfics! I LOVE THIS!

It was very well-thought-out, and I enjoyed waiting for what the next plot twists would be. Could've been a little more April/Jalil (love that pairing almost as much as D/C), but it was still good...

Keep on writing, dude!

Moonfire Morgaine

. I'm so lame, I finally read this! But it was VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY SUPER TREMENDOUSLY WONDERFUL! I loved it! Loved it lots!

*gasp* My name is Andrea, too! Normally I would input one of my bishies to say something snappy, but this is an Everwolrd section and you lay claim to David sooo...

Anyway, great job. I loved/adored it. . What else is there to say?

Andrea...this'll scare the crap out of you but hey...I *had* to do it.

Kill me later, but I read this fanfic...the whole damn thing. Even the hyperactive sidenotes (and the me falling into the pit with Vegeta...and Christopher _)

AND on the airplane ride home, I finished the stupid series...be proud of me!

I just wanted to say, that even though it would have been more fun for me to interact a lil more, this fanfiction was frickin amazing! I loved it. Although Senna should've been bitch-slapped more often but hey...what can you do?

Be one with the floor and worship D/C slash!

Queen Vegeta (PS. I uploaded MY Everworld fanfic...hehehehehehe...)

;_; ::sniff:: It's...over?

Christopher: ::snuggling with David:: Appears to be, yep.

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! What am I s'posed to do now? I need more CxD fluff!

David: You could always get off your butt and write some yourself.

Christopher: Yeah! Maybe then I'd finally get some!

David: ::whaps Chris with the handle of his sword::

Christopher: Owch! You don't have to be so violent all the time!

David: ::glares::

Oh well. It's great that you made a happy ending and our little Davey is okay...

Daivd: ::looks like he greatly objects to being called 'Davey'::

But it's also sad that it's over. I alwasy feel the same way when I finish a series.

Christopher: Pfft. When's the last time you ever finished a series?

I resent that!

David: Only because it's true.

:P Well you know what you have to do now Duck-chan? SEQUEL!

Christopher: Only if I get some this time! *whap* OWCH! Gee snookums, I'm not really into the whole sadomachism thing so ya think you could ease off OWOWOWOWOW OKAY OKAY STOP! Geez... ::rubs sore head::

David: Serves you right.

Congratulations on a job well done Duck-chan. I'll be hoping for more from you soon _

luv,

Cherry

It's over? *sniffle* How sad... (this is Konran-chan under her other name btw...) Great ending though! I really didn't see that coming! And I'm in the credits! *does a little happy dance* Yay! I hope to see your next project soon! _

*Konran-chan*

Yes, it's me. DarkAngel. I'm here to haunt you again. Wow, that was soooo good! I'm going to read it over and over again. The ending was so sweet, the way Christopher just held David and let him cry. That was so sweet! NOW, you had BETTER continue Snow Wars. I need to know what develops between them and don't forget, David was raped, well, the book gave implications of rape. So, Continue Snow Wars asap, as soon as possible!

... wow. Read it over again. ::coughs:: ;; I was always a forgetful reviewer, but I really need to cover at least some of the best parts of this fic! Cause... it was awesome. :D I adore it... and now am very sad that it's done... Anyway- basically, I love David now. You've succeeded in making me a huge fan. ::sniffs:: Poor baby... I loved the angst of this fic. XD And the wonderful cuddling of Christopher and David, of course. You handled their entire issue *highly* well, and I think everyone should love how well this fic is done. Pretty writin', too. And I LOVED the flashback of sorts, where David first meets Jalil... that was probably one of the greatest things I've read as in a scene with Jalil in it, cause... ;; It was just GOOOOOD. I thought you were brilliant, loved the "biology" thing. ::beams:: And... eee, trying to kill Jalil is always fun. I remember reading that chapter and going, "AAHHH! Shibby! This is the best!" Not to mention the multitude of wonderful David scenes you've come out with... all around... I guess I just wanted to review again to point out some of my favourite things along the way that I should have reviewed on a long time ago...? ;; I LOVE this fic. I will continue to love it while it's done. (YAY! Chris/David all the way! ... poor Jalil. Maybe a threesome's not a bad idea...) (Jalil: NO WAY IN HELL. -_-;;) ... right then. Going to sleep before I actually DO write that... x_x

... wow... ::softly:: It's... finished... and... it seems almost like a part of everything's done, and yet... _ Wow. Just... wow. This really is amazing, and I still love it as badly as I loved it when I first started really reading it- I have to say, it's become my favourite piece of EW fiction EVER, and a source of inspiration for me. ::bows:: It's PERFECT. And the ending... My GODS, it's wonderful, and you are *excellent* at this... _ Thank *you*. For this great, awesome, powerful cool as hell fanfic that I'll definatly keep coming back to read. (Actually, I plan to read it over from start to finish here right now. MWAHAHAHAA!) Soooo... yes. ;; I'm half awake, I really shouldn't be reviewing... I'll do another coherent one here in a little bit...

*cries*

It'sovernononononoit'sover!

Sad, sad, sad... I didn't want it to end... Noooo! I'm gonna cry!

Okay, I think I'm done.

I've seriously enjoyed this story and am sad that it's over. I've gotten very involved. It is wonderfully written and one of my favorites for fanfiction stories. I can't wait to read more from you and e-mail from time to time, eh. Or IM me: fluffnstuff316

We can chat about C/D slashy thoughts. :o)

xoxoxo the Hardcore QTpie xoxoxo

I can't believe it's over! Oh, I think I need a tissue! This is wonderful, powerful. I've been reading this story ever since I found out about fanfiction.net, and no chapter has ever dissapointed. This is, undoubtedly, the best EW fic there is. You are a genius, Duck. Hail to the Authoress Supreme! And may her muse inspire many more stories (pleads hopefully and grovels for more).

Yay! You didn't do it! *glomps* I love you forever. I try really hard to be me, you know. Big job, takes a lot of being stupid to pull it off. *giggles* My slashy sense is tingling Spider Girl! (Is there a spider girl? o.0) Good ending. WHHEEE! Have I mentioned I'm sad to see this end, though its a good ending? At least its a good ending, and thats always good. Whoo, redundancy is friggan' fun!