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| flying peaches 2006-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abusereal penname D1G1T4L darkness that's deep... and i recently got into csi :D love messer, but i felt sad in this episode |
| Secret4eyes 2005-12-03 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this is really really good - you really got under Danny's skin. For English not being your first language, it's incredibly well put together. Great work! |
| Igiveup 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, this is good. |
| Nikki the Reader 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh! Please tell me that you're going to post another part to this. Wonderfully angsty. You just want to cuddle poor Danny, but he wouldn't let you. I really enjoyed this. We definitely need Mac's point of view too. |
| just a reader 2005-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseEven if English is not your first language, your use of it is still better than that of many native speakers. Congratulations on mastering the language so well. |
| Dybdahl 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abusewow, that was brilliant! It just felt so real. |
| aishah 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abuseVery thought-provoking. So melancholic and sad and...lost. |
| Adamsgirl 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abusewow, that was written really well! :D i can't believe that English is not your first language! :D you really captured Danny's past and thoughts, i like the way you talked about his father... |