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| ThReE gIrLs WiTh PoCkY 2007-10-12 ch 1,  | abusehe he he ... this is da cutest! i love it ... neji is so awesome! |
| JadeHeartOfFire 2007-05-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute... |
| blondebe 2007-02-27 ch 1, | abusethat was a great story. you got the personalities of the characters, and at the same time made a wonderful story. |
| SweetKisses9 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abuseaw how cute! Ha! thats what you get Sasuke for betraying her *sticks tangue out* lol |
| Ninetailed Angel Projects 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseNo flow, and the detail was cliche. The mood was ill-executed, and unfelt. But I'm only saying that to improve your writing. You understand, right? ^^; Yeah, yeah, I know I'm being kinda blunt, but Is it better that way, or to give you encouragement and say "Great story, hope to see more" without giving you these tips? Personally, I liked the idea, you just didn't put it together well. ^^; |
| BloodRedAngel808 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuseVery good! I loved it! |
| Miss Written 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseAll I have to say is AW! *NCB*~ |
| bbex 2006-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! That was so bloody awesome ^_^ |
| glayd 2006-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abusethats so sweet and beautiful T.T aw |
| mina-chan 2006-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww that was sweet... so cute |
| yuuNera92 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusegreat story! |
| Shujouteki Kumo 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseSWEETNESS! Yes, Sakura, forget that jerk, Sasuke! Yay for NejiSaku! Nice short one short! GOOD JOB! |
| angels smile 2006-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so beautiful and cute |
| little-haruno-sakura 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abusethat was very cute! good job! |
| squozen-juice 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseoh thats so sweet!! really good writing by the way ^_^. ja ne! hinari |